Luiz_Alberto

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2020-10-21 Bergabung Global
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Luiz_Alberto
Luiz_Alberto
1 years ago
Posted

Incredible story , Incredible Writing Quality , Incredible main character and , most of all , Incredible Logic Development ! Detail : That's Young Justice , a cartoon, which started out a little fun and got boring and repetitive over time , even though it's DC , it should be posted in the Fanfics catalog on TV .

Luiz_Alberto
Luiz_Alberto
1 years ago
Posted

This story really disappointed me! Batman is TOTALLY irrational and the Justice League justifies this behavior for anything (He literally tried to KILL the MC in Chapter 7 , and failed by very little and still says that was the right thing just because he didn't know who the MC was, with her friends justifying it), the Justice League revealed her secret identity to her mother and justified it with the classic "You gave us no choice" with the sad look. F%CK . For Batman to want to arrest the MC just because he COULD mean a risk is too much of a stretch even for a deliberately repulsive story about Young Justice or any other DC universe. It's absurd and focused mostly on the worst aspects of the characters in the comics that just showed up there because of bad writing.

Luiz_Alberto
Luiz_Alberto
1 years ago
Posted

O protagonista é legal , a história é ótima e mandou um grande "FODA-SE" para a moralidade distorcida autojustificada dos super-heróis da DC Comics . Parabéns

Luiz_Alberto
Luiz_Alberto
Luiz_Alberto
1 years ago
Commented

I, on the other hand, find it extraordinarily amazing that he didn't have this monologue before, which means he never doubted his plans!

Luiz_Alberto
Luiz_Alberto
2 years ago
Commented

Things were just happening between Him, Kara and Raven. It wasn't the fabricated eroticism shown in Fiction (Surprisingly) . He's made it very clear that he's not after a harem. Making a harem for him now would be spitting on most of the story .

Luiz_Alberto
Luiz_Alberto
2 years ago
Posted

FINALLY FUCKING! Finally a fanfic in which the protagonist is not resigned to being a punching bag just because he saw comics and live-action adaptations of these fucking freaks. Seriously, ALL superheroes at some point have extremely immoral and misanthropic behavior, but almost every fanfic I've read so far has the MC trying to make excuses for it, even when he himself is the target of this antics. Congratulations !

Luiz_Alberto
Luiz_Alberto
2 years ago
Posted

Ótima história , é envolvente e mostra uma reação mais realista aos tipos de absurdos completamente ridículos e estúpidos que universos ficcionais como os da Marvel continua à mostrar . Foi exatamente para esse tipo de realidade ambientadas em versos de "Herói vs. Vilão" que eu comecei a ler fanfics em primeiro lugar .

Luiz_Alberto
Luiz_Alberto
2 years ago
Posted

Excelente novel , gostei da construção de mundo e do modo como ele muda outros universos além do Universo Marvel . Só dei um 4,8 por causa da demora para novos capítulos .

Luiz_Alberto
Luiz_Alberto
2 years ago
Commented

Sorry , I forgot to put the stones in yesterday and didn't wake up until noon . Would have given 500 for sure. Anyway, amazing story , I hope it makes a continuation or a spin-off of the other characters that the MC inspired and transmigrated .