Up to this point (ch 38) the book is very enjoyable and also well paced. The concept I found really interesting since it's the first time I've read a sci-fi biblical parody type novel, and it's entertaining seeing the chaotic mess of a relationship between Weyah, Adam, and Eve. The worldbuilding and magic system bits are mostly told through small sections of exposition but the story moves along fast enough that you don't notice it too much. I did find the characters to be overall quite likeable+believable; they all have their own traits that can move the story forward and it isn't solely dependent on the mc which makes the world feel all the more immersive and interesting. One thing though, the transitions for the switching of character perspectives are sometimes in the middle of a chapter rather than at the beginning which I did get used to however I can see it being a tad confusing for some. Don't really have much else to say cuz words are hard but I'd recommend reading this novel.
:0
The bromance is 👌
I concur
Still not completely sure what this God's motives are exactly but hopefully it will be explained later on
Also things are getting intense lol it's reminiscent of the Illuminae trilogy but the concept is very unique
I like how Eve displays human nature in a more realistic way and isn't completely a heart of gold kid or just e d g y
Lmao eveee c'est pas le temps d'être une yandere
That is spicyyy lmao "forbidden fruit" :D lovely scene their interactions are cute
Ye I understand; it's honestly great you've been able to write so much while still in school. But ye I'll still be looking forward to updates in the future for this and imma check out enpc with a chicken in the meantime. Keep up the good work author! ^^
Adam's Inconspicuous Life
Fantasy · SquareGoat