I've liked what you made so far! excited to see how you change it up :)
I see you put taking a break. that's big sad. I like this story alot
man I can't stand this build-up! I need Lilly and sev to confront each other again! love the story!! can't wait for more
what a good chapter and story! just found it the yesterday, I can't wait to see where you continue to take it! take my powerstones
It's not Amidala Idustries but it is acceptable
Chapter 27: Skywalker Industries
Amalgam Darth Vader/Snape(HP, Star Wars)(In process of being rewrite!)
Movies · Shadow7Blue
read up to chapter 31at the time of this review, so far I really like this fic! I think it had a few weird things with how mc becomes friends with harry, but other that that I like were it's gone so far and can't wait to read more!!!
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Amalgam Darth Vader/Snape(HP, Star Wars)(In process of being rewrite!)
Movies · Shadow7Blue
just read this story. it was good, hope you come back to it some day!
thanks for the chapter! can't get enough of this fic
good story so far ! [img=recommend]
Harry Potter: I'm James Potter.
Book&Literature · Nathe07