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conveying unheard and hidden emotions through writing.|| humble beginnings. >>WIP: Yesterday's Cicatrix<< Discord: annederxee#2377 Instagram: annederxee

2020-10-08 Bergabung Global
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annederxee
3 years ago
Posted

The story is fine, I suggest writing the chapters neatly: fix the grammar and punctuation, the number of words per chapter should be precise and the conversations; make it straight to the point and useful. I hope my review helps and motivates you to write at your best! Good luck, Jagriti! You can do this! I'll continue reading your masterpiece 😊

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annederxee
3 years ago
Posted

Hi author! The storyline is great and interesting, however, I want to suggest something. Chop off those bulky paragraphs and use proper punctuation. That's it! It's great after all and might get better throughout the whole story! Good work!👌

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annederxee
3 years ago
Posted

Hands down to this story. The author's writing really drew me in and I can feel what the mc is going through. It almost made me cry (not to be dramatic but that's how vulnerable i am with these topics) Definitely need new updates! 🥺

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annederxee
3 years ago
Commented

ooof.. that's mean :(

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The Bloodline System

The Bloodline System

Fantasy · TimVic

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annederxee
3 years ago
Posted

I need more chaps! The story isn't my cup of tea but after reading its few chapters, it changed my mind. I like the author's writing style, keep it up! This story is highly recommended 😉

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annederxee
3 years ago
Commented

interesting

I enter the school corridor, tugging unto my sweater as I pass the sea of Balenciaga's and Prada's. They have their designer outfits on and are grouped into cliques, no doubt talking about which country they visited over the weekend or which store they splurged thousands of dollars in. I bet they've never worked a day in their life yet they lavishly spend money like it is nothing but paper.

Hate You, Love You.

Hate You, Love You.

Teen · Queen_Of_Royals

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annederxee
3 years ago
Commented

-,-

"Why did she shout?" Chris asked. Allyson chuckled. "She shouted all her problems at the lighthouse. Man, My ears are still ringing from all those noise." She clarified.

The Truth Untold.

The Truth Untold.

Urban · Royal_mint

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annederxee
3 years ago
Commented

Okay! This is only the beginning and it makes me want mooooreeee!!! So good!

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annederxee
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

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annederxee
3 years ago
Commented

haha the bird is cute and adorable at the same time funny XD

"Search yourself you lowly servant!!This is not a big trouble for you to find the foods right.Go on and bring some for me as well or else.....I think you understand and now go away shoo,shooo!!!",shouted the bird with its small beak which looks adorable for me but I took his warning seriously.

THE ORDER OF THE ELEMENTS

THE ORDER OF THE ELEMENTS

Fantasy · Zane_Earth

  • Yesterday's Cicatrix original

    Yesterday's Cicatrix

    Realistic ACTION ROMANCE MYSTERY CEO

    4.91

    Everyone has their wounds of the past, whether it's profound or shallow, they're all the same. The damage that this affects us, built us into who we are today. However, not all wounds are healed by time. Some are always there, hidden with different emotions, with distinct techniques. Some may be healed that leaves a scar but there's a part of it that needs to be unfolded again to rejuvenate completely. Because of the harsh cell of the yore, these people at the present are stuck, suffering from unhealed backstories. How can you move on when until now, past things are hunting you? Will you let your past define who you are? Until when can you neglect the real voice knocking some sense on you? ========================================================================================== DISCLAIMER: This story is pure fiction. Any names, places, organizations, events, etc. are all parts of the author's imagination. Any resemblance or similarities to someone, something, or actual events are purely coincidental. I DO NOT OWN THE BOOK COVER, CREDIT GOES TO THE RIGHTFUL OWNER. IF THE OWNER WANTS, I'LL TAKE IT DOWN. * * * I hope you'll like this novel! Please support this story by dropping your comments, votes, and kindly add to your libraries! Thank you ;)

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