Noted, will keep it consistent next time
Black Clover?
The start was slow, but that doesn’t mean you should rewrite the story. Everyone writes the beginning of stories differently in hopes to creating the transition they need to connect the events they want. I’d just continue writing if I were you since you’ve been doing pretty good so far. +1
Bab ini telah dihapus.
Speedster in Multi-verse ( It is rewritten in the new book.)
Anime & Comics · EZRED
Tbh needed a character that if I introduced early on the will have no major impacts on the story-line. Especially since Ymir is a character with no real “character” or persona, i thought it will be best to use her as rhe connection to AOT.
It is a different font, I am able to see it from my phone.
𝙏𝙝𝙚 𝙖𝙗𝙞𝙡𝙞𝙩𝙮 𝙩𝙤 𝙖𝙡𝙬𝙖𝙮𝙨 𝙞𝙣𝙩𝙚𝙜𝙧𝙖𝙩𝙚 𝙮𝙤𝙪𝙧𝙨𝙚𝙡𝙛 𝙞𝙣 𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙮 𝙨𝙞𝙩𝙪𝙖𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝙖𝙨 𝙞𝙛 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙬𝙚𝙧𝙚 𝙖𝙡𝙬𝙖𝙮𝙨 𝙢𝙚𝙖𝙣𝙩 𝙩𝙤 𝙗𝙚𝙡𝙤𝙣𝙜 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧𝙚. 𝙉𝙤 𝙤𝙣𝙚 𝙬𝙞𝙡𝙡 𝙦𝙪𝙚𝙨𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝙮𝙤𝙪𝙧 𝙚𝙭𝙞𝙨𝙩𝙚𝙣𝙘𝙚 𝙖𝙧𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙮 𝙛𝙚𝙚𝙡 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙩𝙧𝙪𝙡𝙮 𝙗𝙚𝙡𝙤𝙣𝙜 𝙬𝙝𝙚𝙧𝙚 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙖𝙧𝙚. 𝙎𝙞𝙢𝙞𝙡𝙖𝙧 𝙩𝙤 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙥𝙡𝙤𝙩 𝙖𝙧𝙢𝙤𝙧 𝙤𝙛 𝙖 𝙥𝙧𝙤𝙩𝙖𝙜𝙤𝙣𝙞𝙨𝙩, 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙗𝙖𝙨𝙞𝙘𝙖𝙡𝙡𝙮 𝙜𝙚𝙩 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙥𝙧𝙤𝙩𝙚𝙘𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝙤𝙛 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙘𝙪𝙧𝙧𝙚𝙣𝙩 𝙬𝙤𝙧𝙡𝙙 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙛𝙪𝙩𝙪𝙧𝙚 𝙬𝙤𝙧𝙡𝙙𝙨 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙙𝙚𝙘𝙞𝙙𝙚 𝙩𝙤 𝙫𝙞𝙨𝙞𝙩. 𝙏𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙢𝙚𝙖𝙣𝙨 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙢𝙪𝙨𝙩 𝙗𝙚 𝙞𝙣𝙘𝙡𝙪𝙙𝙚𝙙 𝙞𝙣 𝙢𝙖𝙞𝙣 𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙣𝙩𝙨 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙨𝙩𝙧𝙪𝙜𝙜𝙡𝙚𝙨 𝙖𝙨 𝙞𝙛 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙬𝙚𝙧𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙥𝙧𝙤𝙩𝙖𝙜𝙤𝙣𝙞𝙨𝙩 𝙤𝙛 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙨𝙩𝙤𝙧𝙮. 𝙔𝙤𝙪 𝙬𝙞𝙡𝙡 𝙨𝙩𝙧𝙪𝙜𝙜𝙡𝙚 𝙬𝙝𝙚𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙢𝙖𝙞𝙣 𝙘𝙝𝙖𝙧𝙖𝙘𝙩𝙚𝙧𝙨 𝙨𝙩𝙧𝙪𝙜𝙜𝙡𝙚, 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙬𝙞𝙡𝙡 𝙛𝙚𝙚𝙡 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙞𝙧 𝙥𝙖𝙞𝙣 𝙖𝙨 𝙞𝙛 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙬𝙚𝙧𝙚 𝙖 𝙛𝙖𝙢𝙞𝙡𝙮. 𝙉𝙤 𝙢𝙤𝙧𝙚 𝙚𝙖𝙨𝙮 𝙡𝙞𝙛𝙚.
Conquering the Multiverse
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I saw your comment man. that is just one subtle introduction. I will be introducing goddesses that are original characters later in the story, and my character, I repeat will not be getting his memories back. He will hear stories about him from before, but his answer will be that he is not that guy and he is he. I just used that preface to explain why he had some sort of cheat in the beginning, getting the Biomnitrix. He will have a relationship with them, but nothing based from the previous one he had. This is not going to be any xianxia, I read too many of them before hoping to find a good one, but never found, no young master bs. Also, I am not a fan of the chinese cultivation system, so that will definetly not be included. Just wanna let you know that I hear what you have to say.
I’ll try not to make it boriNg XD
Don’t worry it will be a but before he gore to the AOT world, he just basically gained access to it thriugh Ymir.
I like your thinking there
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original The New Zeus
Given a new chance at life….but who would have expected this new life to be the life of a God. This would be my take on Greek mythology as well as other pantheons mixed into the modern/fantasy world.6 Chs 103 Koleksi
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Conquering the Multiverse
The journey of a man who died and was pulled into a competition for the entertainment of the gods. Just a heads up, this will be a wish fulfillment story with of course a "pokemon" harem, but with meaning behind every decision made. I intend this story to be a mix of everything from any anime, comic or manga as long as there is a significance for it being added. I am going to try to make this a good story even though I am new to this. If you want anything let me know in the comments. The Following is what I intend to follow: 1st World: Attack on Titan 2nd World: ????? 3rd World:????? 5th World: ????????? ....this list will continue, I just need to plan out the rest. I might mix up things a bit but I intend to at least include what I already wrote down above. Like I said if you want me to include anything, comment asking, and if you include an explanation behind what you want I might as well include it. If you decide to support this novel, thank you for your support.10 Chs 211 Koleksi
Honestly, I like where this story is heading and have been here since when you first published the story… even after the rewrite. Very descriptive and detailed. The author doesn’t just sudden introduce new characters, leading to a more structured and flowing storyline/plot. I really feel like this story should be more popular than it currently is. Probably just need to add more tags to the story to bring in new readers. Other than that can’t wait to see how the story progresses.
Speedster in Multi-verse
Anime & Comics · EZRED