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Although the energy inside his body was enough for him to breakthrough to the third stage in body refinement, he still couldn't do it as he hadn't comprehended the Dao of Space.
Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: The beginning
Games · Demonic_angel
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ch 167 Chapter 163: The Gods are Corrupt, FBI
Games · Demonic_angel
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ch 167 Chapter 163: The Gods are Corrupt, FBI
Games · Demonic_angel
Great at the start, fun to read... I personally don't need to say something, the other negative reviews are great at showing you why you should save your time and not read this. If i had to say something, I hate how they switch pov's like "Oh? I will save this future strong person!" (switches to the random strong person and they are now about to die and their teammates are now dead) "I am here!". That is just weird and bad writing in my opinion, why go from being in present tense to going back in time to show us the future strong person and I know that Mc could just be watching and waiting until they are desperate for help but I hate that to so.. I also hate to much action, I feel suffocated by it when we don't get breaks for some guild development or just training-just something I feel like the characters don't have a breather but I guess it a damn if you do and a damned if you don't because no one likes filler unless the characters are happy and are interacting with one another so we can see into their relationships.
Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God
Games · Lucky Old Cat