Very good read! I enjoy learning more about the MC and reading the battle scenes. I feel the author is very good at adding descriptions to the scenes to make it easier for the reader to envision.
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I like the two timelines idea!
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I'm only a short bit into the story so far but I am hooked! I really like the detailing put into the characters and the world as well as how well the author describes each scene.
I enjoyed reading this story a lot. I quickly made my way through all 7 chapters and am already waiting for the next one to come out! [img=recommend]
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Very good start for 1st time writing!
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Current Goals: - Potentially get a new cover - Release more backstories (still debating between splitting them up or releasing all together before next chapter of main story) - Release chapter 2 of main story
Self review yes I know LOL. I want to use this as a thread that I can provide updates but also respond to any questions that any of you may have. So feel free to ask anything underneath this review and keep checking for new information about the series!
This work definitely has a lot of potential. I enjoyed your writing style and the mystery aspects as well! Looking forward to the next few chapters![img=recommend]