hmm odd... I'm using app and my reply comment still thereWebnovel can sometimes get funky huh? 😅😂
besides, I chose female mc since the opposite we already have the male lead... and I kinda inspired from the trio of female demons: Labasu, Labartu, Akhkhazu, from mesopotamian mythology
What? weird, I didn't delete my reply comment though... and it is still there answering whether or not it's a yuri story... and the answer, it is not a yuri story, not even this story aimed to go deeper into a romance one, there's romance but only an allusion to it.Once again, I didn't delete my reply comment ><
nope it's not yuri. Though there are bound to be an allusion of romance (same or opposite) this story doesn't aim to go deep into it...
What you just said is a 101 writing a smart mc, which basically is "making other characters stupid to make the mc looks smarter."
"It is pure genius!" Adel stood up and walked over to me, grabbing my hands. holding them in hers. her actions caught me by surprise. "Such a thing has never been thought of before and could actually allow us to truly bring huge benefits to the kingdom."
Fantasy · invayne
well, and because the enemy side is mostly incompetent. They outnumbered them the battlefield to my knowledge is a complete flat land without labyrinth-like terrain... once the fog popped and the opponent's side which oddly retreated and scattered, I'd have the enemies soldiers to charge towards the main camp with overwhelming numbers and had the mages to support from behind or maybe planting magical landmine if that exists in this story. But still, it's sink or swim tactic, only depended on high numbers and luck... and some of them may die, but that is the sacrifice I'm willing to make.
"It is the results of your planning. If you did not come up with such a plan, we would have been stuck in the encirclement for who knows how long. This plan has won us this battle." My father picked me up and placed me on his shoulder. Like this, we gazed down at the battlefield and watched as the enemy tried to retreat.
Fantasy · invayne
well, Faith in fact doesn't need any "tactic" to begin with, even as a pure support her op-ness already rigged the war from the start.
Instead to restrain, I think Faith should be at peaceful with this so-called ancient will... because you are "peaceful" when you are capable of great violence, but you do not choose to do.
"War…." While I hated the idea, it was true that unless I can get control over my ancient bloodline, I will always be at risk of losing myself to the ancient will. It seemed to be a type of will that wished to slaughter. And I, for one, was not a fan of slaughtering. Although my previous battle did not make it seem like I was against it… In truth, I just wished to adventure around and only fight if it was absolutely necessary. I was not against helping others and whatnot, but this was my true wish. I wanted to run around seeing the sights of the world and then stop in to visit my family every once in a while. This way, I could go to different lands and learn more magic along the way. But now, not just once but twice, I will need to venture onto the battlefield.
Fantasy · invayne
there you go, folks... another edgy main character
I wanted power, but I wonder if having so much power now that I was using it to kill so many was actually a good thing. But even while I was struggling with all of this, my lips were still curled up into a smile, a giggle had even escaped my lips. My blood felt like it was on fire. I was starting to wonder if becoming a Dragonic was a good thing. I began to wonder if I should have done my research better but…. "I feel so exhilarated! Hahaha!"
Fantasy · invayne
Thank you so much. So glad you're enjoying it so far, despite its snail's pace and the "wheneverly" update >< and to think there's still someone waiting for a chapter update with so much patience... in fact I can't thank you enough, But please, if there's something weighing on you about the story so far, you are welcome (no, but I demand you) to write any criticism, feedback, and or suggestion, regarding everything related to the story... I'll take all of it into consideration to write an enjoyable story for us all.
Sin of Kin
Fantasy · Houraji