I think it's okay. You can turn down a little information since those details from the first chapter are relevant for the story. But it would be great to soften the pace through and add more immersion for the MC for all of that. Well, that's my thoughts. But still, the story was so damn interesting and thoughtfully unique. It's a great piece indeed.
Learning about the Indian culture from a narrative story is trully fascinating. Since in the first place, world history thoroughly sparks my interest... and somewhat I could relate myself with the MC because of that. The world background is overwhelming and the story is well-written. I don't see that much mistakes. But since it's supposed to be a novel, it would be better not to dump manifold informations about the said memoir and instead, insert them in various chapters as it goes on. It will really thrill readers to binge more. Although, I didn't seem to have any problem of all those since I usually spend amount of my time reading historical related books... which was way hard to understand than any of the works I read like yours. I will read more of this story and put my heart into it. Thanks for the daily usage! I'll support this book no matter what.
Werewolf related stories had a massive spot on my heart... I used to read so many of this genre since the written plot regarding the story usually impresses me. I would really love to know more about their interaction and such and to journey more with the conflicts that goes around it. BTW, I love the characters so much. So keep up the good job!
This is totally an interesting story. The first chapters itself are intriguing... which was were most authors struggled with, including me. The world background is something. I could literraly catch up with those insights the author had polished. Character design is clear and the writing quality is superb. This story marks my interest. You readers gotta read this! Your time wont be wasted.[img=recommend]
i think it depends.
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Apollo boutta be hoppin. (PJO insider)
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Reminds me of Percy Jackson
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*those I mean
Thanks you so much. I'll fix all of that.
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original Distancing with You
(This is a general fiction story taking place around the COVID-19 pandemic with an ill-natured journalist as the protagonist.) Have you ever feel the pain our heroes had gone through? Then this story will help you get closer as new challenges and learnings unfolds in front of them. Introduction : Aiden Ferrel had forgotten most of the things he knew about his life, including his past tortures around people who he knew by then was significant throughout. When by that time he had a commision to film a document about the hardships and sacrifices of medical workers around the current war, fragments of memories had gone through him- All that is enough to infuriate him. As he went closer to them, he had a feeling of sentiments running throughout - a feeling that will no longer sustain himself. "Let us create blissful memories and I'll capture it with my all my heart... before our time ends." (Also please read my review first before reading 'Distancing with You.') Book Cover by: blackwhiterose160816 Chs 8 Koleksi
A very emotional story that has a big future coming from days forward. The author had managed to convey feelings for potential readers with perfect descriptions of the settings behind. A good read! Reccomend for all!
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Urban · LinYang