Khyati94820

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2020-07-24 Bergabung Global
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Khyati94820
Khyati94820
4 years ago
Replied to ky_rine

Hey, thank you so much❤️

Khyati94820
Khyati94820
4 years ago
Posted

Honestly with the way 2020 is going you might just be right with the assumption of 2022. Let's hope that's not true lol. Love the description, writing style and character dialogue. Keep it up!

Khyati94820
Khyati94820
4 years ago
Posted

I found the story intriguing. The graduation ceremony really made me feel like I was there. Since I won't be graduating this year, the one in the book really made me happy. I love the way Seraphine stood up to Gabriel always nagging at her, nice to see the MC has a back bone. The affection there among the group of friends is really heart warming. Keep up the good work!

Khyati94820
Khyati94820
4 years ago
Commented

.*

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Khyati94820
4 years ago
Commented

two can play the game*

Khyati94820
Khyati94820
4 years ago
Commented

I'm just 5'0...being 5'4 is a dream

Khyati94820
Khyati94820
4 years ago
Commented

you have missed the full stops at the end of dialogues in many places.

Khyati94820
Khyati94820
4 years ago
Commented

hey I know I finished my review and all but I wanted to continue reading. So a couple things, 1. Try naming ur chapters differently, smthing that would be more appealing to the reader. 2. I noticed that you used sm words too many times, other might not so it's not that big a deal but it's still a minor issue 3. A couple missing commas, again, not a big problem but it's still a problem. Other than that ur book is seriously amazing and the plot is just ...I have no words!

Khyati94820
Khyati94820
4 years ago
Posted

The plot here is completely different and unique, it has the ability to attract readers very well. The storyline, the characters, the opening scene all are on point. Really been a while since I found a great book like this. Keep doing what your doing coz it's really awesome!

Khyati94820
Khyati94820
4 years ago
Commented

Curtain*

That small movement attracted Lucian's attention towards the woman but he couldn't see anything past the curtains of her hair that was shielding her face.

Pursuit of Love : Adorable Husband and Precious Wife

Pursuit of Love : Adorable Husband and Precious Wife

Urban · KCChakry

  • The Silent Phoenix original

    The Silent Phoenix

    Teen ACTION COMEDY

    Name: Luciana Crest Gender: Female Job: Assassin Type: Field Agent Status: Deceased That's what her file says now. That's what it has said for five years. But, what others don't know, is that she's out there. Alive. And hiding. ~~~~~~~ Luciana has completely cut off ties from her former friends and family, letting them believe she's dead. What else would you do when you had a lunatic, who wants you dead, behind your back? She's living out in the open with a fake name. She starts to feel almost normal. Except for the fact that she doesn't really try to interact with a lot of people which makes her come off as standoffish with her neighbors. Who has time for that, really? Everything seems fine for the first five years. And then shit hits the fan. All because of one mission. Mission: 803 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "Surprise?" He was still looking at the gun, which I didn't let waver. "I didn't know you still kept a gun" "How inconvenient for you."

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