Honestly with the way 2020 is going you might just be right with the assumption of 2022. Let's hope that's not true lol. Love the description, writing style and character dialogue. Keep it up!
I found the story intriguing. The graduation ceremony really made me feel like I was there. Since I won't be graduating this year, the one in the book really made me happy. I love the way Seraphine stood up to Gabriel always nagging at her, nice to see the MC has a back bone. The affection there among the group of friends is really heart warming. Keep up the good work!
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Fantasy · whiteribbon27
two can play the game*
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Fantasy · whiteribbon27
I'm just 5'0...being 5'4 is a dream
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Fantasy · whiteribbon27
you have missed the full stops at the end of dialogues in many places.
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Fantasy · whiteribbon27
hey I know I finished my review and all but I wanted to continue reading. So a couple things, 1. Try naming ur chapters differently, smthing that would be more appealing to the reader. 2. I noticed that you used sm words too many times, other might not so it's not that big a deal but it's still a minor issue 3. A couple missing commas, again, not a big problem but it's still a problem. Other than that ur book is seriously amazing and the plot is just ...I have no words!
The plot here is completely different and unique, it has the ability to attract readers very well. The storyline, the characters, the opening scene all are on point. Really been a while since I found a great book like this. Keep doing what your doing coz it's really awesome!
Curtain*
That small movement attracted Lucian's attention towards the woman but he couldn't see anything past the curtains of her hair that was shielding her face.
Urban · KCChakry
Hey, thank you so much❤️
The Silent Phoenix
Teen · Khyati94820