making the characters dumber than they actually are is such a terrible decision especially when the readers figured out what was going on legit imately a hundred chapters ago. it feels painful to read.
'I'm sorry, but I can't risk our lives,' he thought, snuffing his misplaced empathy and turning to the boy. "Let's move." He said, his voice firm.
I Refused To Be Reincarnated
Fantasy · Adamus_Auguste
nice-->nine
Once he heard about the nice academies, Adam couldn't help but think about Alina.
I Refused To Be Reincarnated
Fantasy · Adamus_Auguste
dante-->dalvin
The others marveled at Lin Feng's presence, while the man himself never even gave Melissa one look, staring at Dante the entire time with a strange glint in his eye. After Boris introduced him, he directly stepped forward while facing Dalvin.
Immortal Simulation
Eastern · Kotario
leading her on is kinda a dick move ngl
Upon seeing the receptionist, Dalvin thanked her for giving him the number and promised to take her out sometime. The receptionist, who had been waiting for this, naturally agreed with a smile and continued to chat with Dalvin for a bit.
Immortal Simulation
Eastern · Kotario
bros exploit got hotfix patched
[Wind Fury (Lv1)]: Enhances the next skill or attack, releasing it twice consecutively, buff lasts 6 seconds. During the Wind Fury buff, Wind Fury cannot be used.
Just call me Thor
Urban · RedBull
[I owe not so evil woman an apology. This one looks much more evil, I bet she doesn't even believe in snacks.] Hawk muttered in Karl's mind as they walked.
The First Legendary Beast Master
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
"Karl and Dana will be training for individual and small group missions, and I wanted them to have a chance to say their farewells to the whole group before they go off with their new professor, Colonel Valerie Braless."
The First Legendary Beast Master
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
Unfortunately, it wasn't the only one on his body. Apart from small tear marks that would heal over time, there were two symmetric scars on his back. They resembled more wounds inflicted with a blade than the result of spiritual trauma, though they still left marks on his soul.
Heaven's Greatest Professor
Fantasy · EG0
"Who doesn't know the school goddess Irina?"
Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
while i do think the whole thing should have been extremely memorable and 13 years shouldn't matter this is not an argument purely of logic, it's at least as important to consider the readers emotional state. seeing someone tumbling around oblivious to what we already know is extremely annoying. if we didn't know and mc didn't know it wouldn't be an issue but we do. ironically these situations are the few instances where it's fine to make you're mc temporarily extremely and overly perceptive, the reader will gloss over it easily as they themselves have also figured it out and subconsciously go yeah makes sense even if it's somewhat unrealistic. this is especially true in set ups where we have the same information as the mc without having the inner thoughts of an outside character
'I'm sorry, but I can't risk our lives,' he thought, snuffing his misplaced empathy and turning to the boy. "Let's move." He said, his voice firm.
I Refused To Be Reincarnated
Fantasy · Adamus_Auguste