Little_Devil24

Little_Devil24

male LV 10
2020-07-05 Bergabung Global
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Little_Devil24
9 months ago
Posted

this is a good start for a story, the vilain, the hero and other characters are well described and way of story telling and world building is good. also so much happening in this universe and you are describing it amazingly, also the first person to third person and vice-versa is also good.

Little_Devil24
Little_Devil24
9 months ago
Replied to halkat

thanks brother i will try my best.

Little_Devil24
Little_Devil24
9 months ago
Posted

Hello Guys! If you have any questions or queries regarding this Novel you can ask me in the Comments. i will reply all of your questions. Thank You!

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