this is a good start for a story, the vilain, the hero and other characters are well described and way of story telling and world building is good. also so much happening in this universe and you are describing it amazingly, also the first person to third person and vice-versa is also good.
This is the tale of an orphan boy who was hit by lightning as a result of a mistake made by a god. He was transported to a world brimming with magic and enigma. Join him on his adventure as he confronts the real horrors of this world with the support of his close ones.
this is a good start for a story, the vilain, the hero and other characters are well described and way of story telling and world building is good. also so much happening in this universe and you are describing it amazingly, also the first person to third person and vice-versa is also good.
Echoes of Light: Triumph over darkness
Fantasy · Slayer_21