Endorph

Endorph

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Endorph
Endorph
Endorph
1 years ago
Commented

Adeus e boa sorte [img=recommend]

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Endorph
Endorph
1 years ago
Commented

Basicamente uma mistura do visual da ultimate do Ekko do LOL, um pouco dos poderes de visão do tempo do Zilean, junto com uma originalidade do autor para não deixar muito quebrado no inicio, de um a dez vc esta otimo 👌.

Endorph
Endorph
1 years ago
Commented

What do you think of (NEO force) as it is literally a new force and is not part of the normal workings of the multiverse, however it can act on both aspects of the balance of the universe.

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Endorph
1 years ago
Commented

Congratulations

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Endorph
2 years ago
Commented

Well one way would be for you to try to fit the political situation of earth more separated from the rest of the magical worlds, the reason is that by the show (at least what I remember) most of the magical kingdoms are monarchies and as his world doesn't have a ruler, and yes representatives. And they separated the magic community from the no magic, which in other worlds doesn't have this difference since everyone knows magic... But I could be wrong since I haven't seen the show in a long time.

Endorph
Endorph
2 years ago
Posted

Very good, the author manages to put a big dose of realism in the story, and still leave it with that touch of nostalgia, and innocence of the original animation, the construction of the universe has a lot of explanation and even without seeing the original story you can understand the story. I highly recommend it for reading.

Endorph
Endorph
2 years ago
Commented

I believe the reason the MC is acting this way is for him to have information about the people of the HP canon, after all although he seems to underestimate this magical community he doesn't take any action to alarm people about his power, and how this world has it too marvel mixed in it, it may be that he is worried that he may be the creator of the deathly hallows, as they can be made by a god of a pantheon or just to make his life difficult for lady death.

Endorph
Endorph
2 years ago
Commented

Serei sincero ficarei triste, pois me cativei pela história e pelo personagem, mas fico muito animado pensando na fica sobre runeterra que você irá fazer , então desejo boa sorte e espero ansiosamente a nova fic.

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