they are pretty good
[The pictures are awful, I know. But I couldn't find any better than these]
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Yea I was about to say something about the skip in chapters as well, but I have to say author the story has been great so far.
Hahahaha thanks for some more great chapters, cant wait for more to come.
All though the chapter was late it was a good chapter, and the concept that you chose for the main character is a good one. I am interested on where you are going to take this later on.
That's fine I can wait a little bit, I know how it feels when that happens. I hope that your will feel better soon and cant wait for more chapters.
Thank you for another great chapter I am looking forward to more.
Hey author thanks again for some new great chapters I really liked them. If I could give any advice for you it would be, if you are thinking of doing a time skip lead with that as a chapter title first, and at the beginning of the chapter say how much time has passed so the story would flow better, and then make the chapter after named Spectral Swordsman as it had most of the infrormation about how he got the name. like I said just some suggestions, cant wait for more of the story.
I was really surprised when I started to read this story because it reminded me a lot of another story that I read that was similar to this one. I was also surprised that you added essence flames to this which is kind of cool, I cant wait for more to come.
Thank you for more great chapters author, I cant wait for more to come.
hammer good choice i like the design.
[This but feminine]
Unique Gamers Travels
TV · ArtoriaPendragon_