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Thanks for the chapter

please clarify the splitting ability of Zhang Fei

it best if he's stay the same but it nice if you can gave us a big surprise in the next arc though

isn't xia tian master in alchemy is a legal loli/loli baba.

Loli are cute they must be protected. Legal loli however are meant to be love

oh it seem we can only escalate the situation as Ye Hang has a greedy desire on something from the Zhang Family

we can escalate it by making Ye Hang as Rival Friend if there is no big reason to make them completely became an enemies to each other

another opinion of mine is that we can describe Zhang Fei's woman as delicate and yet strong headed women like Koneko of High School DxD and Akemi of Akemi Ga Kill. they are beaty and yet deadly

Depending on the situation. let's say the Chu clan make a move that so big like kidnapping or using poison plan something like that so we can say the situation to escalate but this also can be use as a way to introduce the strength of Zhang Fei's woman

I won't agree if the women of the mc will become a barbaric woman but I do agree that they should be able to fight, protect their self and also to stand at the side of the mc not as glass Cannon but as a real cultivator and wife. I think the part of Zhang fei entering a sect is a good so the author may able to focus in strengthening the girls

it's much better than before

fire = flame essence technique, alchemist cultivation water/ice = frozen tundra technique, attack wind = gale wind technique, movement earth = jade skin technique, defence lightning = nine colored tribulation thunder, attack & absorbtion wood = green worls technique, regeneration and attack

No need from my point of view

a nice piece