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Dawn_Janzig
Dawn_Janzig
1 hours ago
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So we have Odin, Loki and Thor. I like how this is going.

"Ah, the Stuart boy," Loki sneered, clearly unimpressed. "What wind blew you here? Aren't you the precious little treasure of your family, so pampered they'd fear you melting in their mouths? And now you've decided to step out into the world?" His tone was sharp, the disdain unmasked.

Harry Potter: Archmage of Another World

Harry Potter: Archmage of Another World

Book&Literature · Glimmer09

Dawn_Janzig
Dawn_Janzig
3 hours ago
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Thank you for all your hard work.

Here's the revised chapter with grammatical corrections and improvements for clarity and flow, while keeping the original meaning intact:

Harry Potter: Archmage of Another World

Harry Potter: Archmage of Another World

Book&Literature · Glimmer09

Dawn_Janzig
Dawn_Janzig
5 hours ago
Commented

Didn't he just say his family was better then Slytheran.

"Enough," Augustus said coldly, silencing the exchange. "A person's lineage means little in the grand scheme of things. Consider Dumbledore and Voldemort—neither came from illustrious families, yet their accomplishments surpass anything most noble houses can claim. A true hero rises beyond their origins. You'd do well to abandon your obsession with family names. Only then can you walk further along the path of magic—the pursuit of truth."

Harry Potter: Archmage of Another World

Harry Potter: Archmage of Another World

Book&Literature · Glimmer09

Dawn_Janzig
Dawn_Janzig
20 hours ago
Commented

Murray?

'Maybe, I should contact Agatha and Alan too… It has been quite some time since they had to deal with any unruly Magicians' The man known as Mr M mused internally before taking off his shirt…

Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Movies · InGlorious

Dawn_Janzig
Dawn_Janzig
22 hours ago
Commented

This is a world full of people living a hidden life. Now they are all coming together. Don't forget the X-men.

"This is Selene, she is the best Death Dealer we have" The leader revealed and to be honest, Voldemort wasn't sure if he believed those words, but he decided to go along with it, for now…

Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Movies · InGlorious

Dawn_Janzig
Dawn_Janzig
23 hours ago
Commented

Kraven , huh. I wonder if we will see Celene.

"So, you are really back… When Mulciber told me you are back, I was certain he was lying" Kraven walked out from the shadows along with a few other vampires, but Voldemort didn't consider anyone to be a threat to him and they probably weren't… There was a reason why Voldemort was considered the strongest Dark Lord. Vampires didn't possess the ability to use Magic, but they were somewhat sensitive to Magic.

Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Movies · InGlorious

Dawn_Janzig
Dawn_Janzig
23 hours ago
Commented

It only took him a few minutes?

It took Harry a few minutes to tell Sirius what he was truly up to and after listening to everything Harry had to tell him, Sirius looked contemplative for a bit. Of course, Harry didn't tell him everything. For example, he didn't tell Sirius anything about his mother, nor did he tell him anything about the Ancient One or her lessons. He might teach Sirius Mystic Arts in the future, just like he taught Jacklyn, but that was for later.

Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Movies · InGlorious

Dawn_Janzig
Dawn_Janzig
1 days ago
Commented

Up to you.

(A/N: Before you guys decide to drop this fic, let me make it clear... This will not turn into Cultivation Fic or anything like that. The Cultivation Technique is only being included because it gives a nice way to strengthen Harry's body. Nothing more. There will be no dao. There will be no dantains, and there will be no body refining techniques...)

Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Movies · InGlorious

Dawn_Janzig
Dawn_Janzig
1 days ago
Commented

As I am not an author and respect the ability in others, I would like to say the following: The author is putting this on this site, for free, and we have the pleasure to read it. It is up to them what is written and how fast.

Then I have also seen so many complaints about short chapters. If you want then I can stop posting regularly and stack chapters together and post them in one go. You can only have either of these... Do you guys want daily updates but short chapters or do you want weekly chapters but long chapters?

Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Movies · InGlorious

Dawn_Janzig
Dawn_Janzig
1 days ago
Commented

If she's just watching him, does she actually know how powerful he is?

Though all of that changed only a few months ago, when the last Peverell she had been watching awakened an intriguing power. She had been watching him since the day he was born and while she would admit that the boy was probably the most impressive Peverell to ever walk on Midgard, that was it… At the end of the day, he was a simple Midgardian, and no matter what, he wouldn't become anything more than that. Alas, that changed a few months ago when he finally awakened something called the X-Gene.

Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]

Movies · InGlorious