PickleMe

PickleMe

male LV 4

a very dreamy lazy nugget, with social anxiety as a cherry top.

2020-06-02 Bergabung Puerto Rico
Lencana 4

Moments 616
PickleMe
PickleMe
4 months ago
Posted

I don't usually review fics but this one seemed promising at the start only to go downhill from there ( no I am not talking about whatever 1 chapter ntr happened, the author already said it would) the writing style is good, the world building isn't bad either but the MC and the interactions are straight up horrible. outside of the MC being the typical the talented handsome Gary tsu who's lust is only overshadowed by lack of defining positive character treats. supposedly he is a kind and great man( author's words not mine) but in reality is a (semi) arrogant selfish hypocritical retard with the self control of a bulldog. he said he doesn't view his mom that way and took 1 chapter exactly to flip, same thing done to the gyaru(whatever her name is) and Komi. I don't fault a guy for being a horn dog but I absolutely blame the author for trying to slip the nice guy who just wants the happiness of others on it. the whole premise of the story is nice until you realise that the author's effect on the story is either perv on girls, make jokes/references and agree with the protag. my assessment that this Is a poorly concealed wish fulfillment SI that fluncuate depending on how horny the author is.

PickleMe
PickleMe
1 years ago
Commented

he didn't need to?his essence of blank should cover that and let him learn it...

Toji said that he used Reiatsu similar to Haki ... well that was a lie. He imagined himself having Haki and trained in it whenever he fought Roger or Mihawk. 

[Being rewritten]

[Being rewritten]

Anime & Comics · Cedric_7512

PickleMe
PickleMe
1 years ago
Commented

the day people understand that what is practiced in the middle east is Polygyny is a good day, even though it is honestly a lot less common in our times

Although it is a well accepted practice in some countries like Arab.

Multiversal: The Shop

Multiversal: The Shop

Anime & Comics · Charlottes

PickleMe
PickleMe
1 years ago
Commented

I would say let he who is most generous cast the first stone but yours is nice as well, have at thee my pebbles.

Let he who is most degenerate cast the first stone!

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

PickleMe
PickleMe
1 years ago
Replied to zeypher

shisui

Really though, who would be stupid enough to use those eyes? Not only is it annoying as bitch, it will also turn me into an emo. For real? I will become an edgelord. The idea makes me shiver. No thank you. I am good as I am. Killing Sasuke and removing him from the whole plot was the best thing I could do though.

Koushin: Konoha's Dragonborn[Completed]

Koushin: Konoha's Dragonborn[Completed]

Anime & Comics · TheFanficGod

PickleMe
PickleMe
1 years ago
Posted

good translation, I enjoyed it a lot even though it is very slow paced for anyone wanting to read on mtl sites it's English name is Naruto coming to marvel.

PickleMe
PickleMe
1 years ago
Commented

while I feel partially offended I can't seem to understand the significance of auriel here

For some reason I swear I hear him cackle 'There is no god but Auri-el!' before he blows up...

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

PickleMe
PickleMe
1 years ago
Replied to C_K_3132

confidently saying the ocean touches itself isn't the gotcha moment you think it is lil bro, also this was kinda satire anyway.

"In the same way that the ocean is a bit wet." She deadpanned.

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne

PickleMe
PickleMe
1 years ago
Posted

a drone mc led by system fic, where the smut/bastardly behaviour takes precedence over all the other aspects of the story.if you are familiar with akikan then you'd know what's usually up add with that an MC who is threatened to only go in the direction of the system or gets extreme punishments.

PickleMe
PickleMe
1 years ago
Commented

honestly, this wasn't beyond my expectations for the last 5 or so chapters, I haven't been able to enjoy this fic as much as I used to.maybe it's due to the fact that it dove into elements that are really known to this measly scrub level MCU enjoyer like limbo and suchmaybe due to the fact that contrasting with the great wisdom hector usually preaches, his development seems particularly forced.or maybe it's just the fact that what drew me into this novel ( aka gacha) has occured on 3? occasions in 62 chapters and of the real time of a full year.the harem, the turns around the romance, the grim side that is displayed in various instances, I can't really bother with any of them to be fair. I will adopt a wait and see approach for now, hopefully (for me) the next chapters would be something I like.