GABISAMA

1 months ago

Commented

Isabela is a character that intrigues me, she is a bit bipolar but so is Marcus, but she makes me curious if everything she does is planned or impulsive, she asks Marco things she already knows all the time and then makes a point of teasing him so he knows she is always watching him, that would make me very uncomfortable, she is a terrible boss.

ch 12 Conversation at dawn

Hidden World.

Horror · kaio_eduardo

GABISAMA

1 months ago

Commented

I'm sorry about your dog man, I know how hard it is to lose a pet, keep writing your novel it's cool I have fun reading it don't let it fall.

ch 10 Ottis King

Hidden World.

Horror · kaio_eduardo

GABISAMA

1 months ago

Posted

It's not amazing; it has its flaws but also potential. I like the theme of vampires and supernatural creatures, although there aren't many stories in this theme that I enjoy. I'll give it a chance, even though the writing is a bit weak. I hope the updates are at least regular. The point-of-view issue bothers me a little, but I don't think it's a big problem.