Tamash1

Tamash1

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I'm a lazy, realistic, dirty minded, Fan-fic Story lover. Most of the time I'm reading. If not, then I play with my pets, listen to music, draw, watch anime, or sleep.

2020-05-17 Bergabung Lebanon
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Tamash1
Tamash1
11 months ago
Commented

No, please don't drop. If you're a bit unsatisfied with it so far, maybe just rewrite some chapters. Either way, this book is amazing, and it always makes my day when I see that it updated :)

Tamash1
Tamash1
2 years ago
Commented

A stone for a chapter :) A fair trade.

Tamash1
Tamash1
2 years ago
Posted

Damn this book is fucking amazing! I just found it today and binge read it, so now I'm all caught up I guess. Though when I checked the latest update, it said that it was two months ago. I have small hope, but please continue to update! I really mean it when I say that this book has a bright future!

Tamash1
Tamash1
3 years ago
Commented

I'm fine with somewhat long fights, but I think it will be better if you just capture the most important parts of the fight like the beginning, middle, and end.

Tamash1
Tamash1
3 years ago
Commented

For me, I would say for him to go alone. You can still add a love interest, I'm fine with it since there's more drama, just don't take all the focus away from the main and change his personality. If you want to read my rant, here's the option to do so lol 👇 I don't really know if your different or not, but I find a lot of stories where the author all of the sudden adds a new character into the mix with the main one, and then they get all the attention and the mains ignored. You probably won't do that, but another thing I'm wary about is that when female characters are added, authors like making the main male be whipped by them. Meaning the male will give everything up to the female with no pride, and will always listen to what she wants. It gets annoying.

Tamash1
Tamash1
3 years ago
Replied to Tamash1

You don't have to if you don't want to. This was just my opinion. ♡

Tamash1
Tamash1
3 years ago
Commented

I just want to get my thought out there, but please don't do an all female crew. I mean, it's fine if there's mostly females, but at least have a couple males. One male is fine too if the crews small.

Tamash1
Tamash1
3 years ago
Commented

Amazing chapter once again! And now, I can finally vote! ☺ 🤩 Happy Halloween~♡♡♡

Tamash1
Tamash1
3 years ago
Commented

Ya know, imma just going to keep on adding comments on each new chapter to show that I 'voted'. You might want to place this concern to the creators or whatever on the fact that no one can vote on your book. ♡

Tamash1
Tamash1
3 years ago
Posted

This book is amazing~! It has it's serious moments and a lot of funny ones. In all honesty, I can't wait to see what you do about Luffy's crew after he took Robin.