This was a magnificent chapter. you did really well, and I couldn't guess what was going to happen next most of the time. I hope you enjoyed writing it.
but that happened right in front of him. well... he atleast saw the corpse.
Asterion remained stoic in the face of the shocking revelation. Not that he was indifferent to the death of a child, but it was like hearing news of someone's death on the other side of the continent: irrelevant to his life.
Anime & Comics · MaliciousPrince
Thanks for the new chapter,
A new problem part 2
TV · Dog_lord
Isn't Fujin going to be standing next to Hiruzen before stuff goes down?
Orochimaru replied, "It's simple. I'll disguise as you and sit next to the old man. You disguise as a normal Sunagakure ninja and intercept Fujin when he tries to reinforce the old man."
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
It also destroys the brain if I remember it right. The flying raijin spreading to the corpse and target were added after.
[A/N: I had initially written Orochimaru reading the Phantom Haven member's memory to set up a future event. Luckily, I recalled that the Phantom Seal doesn't allow memories to be read. Had to read up on all my notes on the Phantom Seal, which felt weird for some reason 😅. So, I had to rewrite most of that stuff. That kinda pushed the fun part of Orochimaru and Rasa's conversation into the next chapter. Sorry about that.
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
Imagine Akuro, Fujin, and Shiden all show up at once. (shadow clones obviously.)
A disgusting grin appeared on Orochimaru's face as he thought, 'Let me see who it was that could make me feel such danger. Hehehe…'
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
The dream cycles are going to be interesting, if they happen in fgo.
Ritsuka's fists clenched at his sides, the weight of his guilt and self-loathing pressing down upon him like a suffocating blanket. "Fine," he spat, his voice tinged with defiance. "I'll do it. Not for redemption, not for salvation, but for the chance to rewrite the sins of my past. And if that means embracing the darkness within me, then so be it."
Anime & Comics · Tahmina_Begum_9138
I mean... he kind of Is now, right?
Her only regret was that she hadn't finished writing her book, "The Eternal King Can't Possibly Be a True Ancestor Girl."
Anime & Comics · DaoistOneTouch
Gilgamesh comes in clutch!!
"Don't bother wasting your energy. I'm quite accurate with my strikes; your Class Card is already shattered," Crimson Moon warned.
Anime & Comics · DaoistOneTouch
I know it's not the same, but still...
However, something incredible happened: the silver serpent in the sky bit its own tail! In the next moment, the entire cloud of venom and acid seemed to rewind in time. Even the cursed spirit appeared confused, but his confusion lasted only a second before he let out a furious roar. Every time he moved, he returned to the same spot he was in, as if trapped in an eternal loop.
[HPxJJK] - Harry Potter and the Supremacy of Cursed Blood
Anime & Comics · MaliciousPrince