YaBoiUhhh

1 years ago

Posted

Black characters already make me happy 🙏🏿. Put that with a good world background, the constant R-18 😏, and just the overall readability of this story and it makes me give it a beautiful 5 star rating…. except for a couple of typos that pop up throughout the chapters. But they’re not even that bad.

Tribal Chief: My tribe of women

Fantasy · 4thBlackGoblin

YaBoiUhhh

1 years ago

Posted

This story is really interesting at the very least. I can’t say much about it as it only has a few chapters; but they’re good enough to already have me enraptured.

Manmade System In Monstergirl Land

Games · Ultimatedaywriter

YaBoiUhhh

3 years ago

Commented

He says, “What’s mine is yours”, but that implies that they both have whatever is being shared.... my problem here is the fact that 1, the don’t share everything (which makes me glad), and 2 she got fire and lighting magic while he only kept ice make magic. Maybe if he could learn it or obtain it in some type of way I would be happier but I think I understand why he let her have it. He doesn’t want her to be defenseless in other worlds, even if she does have super strength it probably wouldn’t be enough to protect herself.

Zerotwo came back to reality and said "Darling, you..." Hiro smiled and stroked her cheek with his thumb as he said affectionately "What's mine is yours, Angel." Zerotwo teared up and hugged him, sobbing and shedding tears of joy.