Theokrist

Theokrist

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2020-05-08 Bergabung Canada
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Theokrist
Theokrist
1 years ago
Posted

very cool story but some stuff is off like calling solar systems galaxies, having the interstellar species being kinda stupid and having almost no back story for the main chacter but the idea for the book is amazing because despite all those other flaws its still pretty interesting the world building is pretty good tho

Theokrist
Theokrist
3 years ago
Replied to Akichi

1.8 meters is 5.9 feet or 5 foot 10.8 inches.

The new Professor was a woman, around thirty years old with chin length red hair. She was very tall, almost 1.8 meter (5'11") high with a muscular build that was more suited to a front line soldier than a Professor.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Theokrist
Theokrist
3 years ago
Commented

thats kinda f%$&ed up.

'So the knights protect the mages while they cast their spells,' My grin widened as my heart began to race in excitement, I was not worried about the shield or anything for that matter, I simply did not want the fight to finish so fast as I wished to enjoy myself a bit more.

Reborn as a DRAGON [STUB]

Reborn as a DRAGON [STUB]

Fantasy · Immortal_Simo

Theokrist
Theokrist
3 years ago
Commented

I think there's a comma( , ) missing in "kneeling over the king spoke" after the word over

Kneeling over the king spoke, "I will be awaiting good results Katharina, and remember your life is more precious than the mission." Even with the stern look, Katharina knows that her father is a doting parent and loves to spoil his daughters like every father. "Take care my child." said the queen before walking down the few steps and giving her child a big hug. "And take here are all the necessary things you will need for the mission. Inside are camping gear, food and water for two weeks, and many other useful things that you might need." Opening a small box she showed us 8 small black rings with a purple gem on top.

Reincarnated as a snake?

Reincarnated as a snake?

Fantasy · Man_of_culture

Theokrist
Theokrist
3 years ago
Commented

DEAD BEAT?!? COUNT LARK IS THE BEST YOU IGNORANT FOOL!!

'That ungrateful b*tch! After so many years of loyal service, always covering her sorry a*s, even volunteering to get rid of her deadbeat husband, that's how she repays me? Now I get why the sod wants to get rid of her.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Theokrist
Theokrist
3 years ago
Commented

how did they not pass the snakes?

Meanwhile, inside the Mystic Realm, Wang Xiuying suddenly pointed to the tall building at the end of the horizon and said, "Look at that pagoda! I think that's the Mystic Pagoda!"

Cultivation Online

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

Theokrist
Theokrist
3 years ago
Commented

does that make the "real" world the upper heavens?

"We have to do something about this Player Yuan! He's tearing the Legacy Families' reputation to shreds! Every single time his name appears on the announcement, it's a slap to our faces! Even worse, we still don't know his identity!" One of the voices said in a serious voice.

Cultivation Online

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

Theokrist
Theokrist
3 years ago
Commented

sounds like someone else you know?

He was an eccentric loner who always did whatever he wanted, getting up to strange and bizarre antics and flagrantly flouting the rules.

I Am Loaded with Passive Skills

I Am Loaded with Passive Skills

Eastern · Eat Apples Late at Night

Theokrist
Theokrist
3 years ago
Commented

where did the wind magic go?

Theokrist
Theokrist
3 years ago
Commented

2.5 meters tall or long?

My size is now around 2 meters and 50 centimeters, way bigger than before, but not as big as the damn bear.

Epic of Ice Dragon: Reborn As An Ice Dragon With A System

Epic of Ice Dragon: Reborn As An Ice Dragon With A System

Fantasy · PancakesWitch