I was really hoping that as the character growth is supposed to be seen the crazy hyper masagony would start to go away.
But they look incredibly feminine too. "No way. I don't want to look like a pretty girl. I'm a manly man."
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14
Why is meditating cringe or lame, this stupid hyper masculinity is starting to get quite grating.
Or cultivating? Nah. It all sounds stupid. I think I just have to accept that training aura is kinda cringe but the results are gonna be worth it.
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14
Oh goody more depressed Emo MC, so much fun to read.
Swole nods absentmindedly, not fully participating in any conversations anyway but Akari agrees wholeheartedly. The risks associated with changing the past were indoctrinated into her for most of the time that she spent with Lucas in the past.
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14
There are berries that can heal as well as cure poison which are very common so this whole hangover scene just feels really forced.
Dawn, Zoey, Barry, Lucas and Swole all wear their own unique expressions in response to the throbbing headache that they share.
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14
This crazy degrading macho-ism is making me like the other characters less and less each chapter.
"Right you are, Lucas," Barry agrees, though the regret was clearly visible in his expression as he forced down another sip of the bitter brew.
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14
Mentioning her chest a few times to make a point about his immaturity sure, but every time just gets annoying to read.
10 Pokeballs... That's still 2000₽. My gaze shifts from the store clerk's breasts to Buneary. I got her with just a single pokeball.
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14
Why if we all know it is female all it does is provide confusion, and look like a mistake.
*Note: the "he" and "him", doesn't mean that this charmander is male, at first, I always put "he" and "him" because I don't want to say if the Pokémon is male or female, although we already know the gender, but I want to do it in that way...
Pokémon: The Ultimate Adventure of Ash (Remake)
Anime & Comics · Bloodnight
It is really nice to see an MC being nice to his system and grateful to his system.
"Thank you for everything..." – I said with my eyes half closed.
Pokémon: The Ultimate Adventure of Ash (Remake)
Anime & Comics · Bloodnight
Umm this was quite apparent when he challenged you to a battle so why specify this. Every little thing does not need to be specifically clarified for the reader.
Apparently he is also a trainer.
Pokémon: The Ultimate Adventure of Ash (Remake)
Anime & Comics · Bloodnight
Yea this feels like an over the top reaction like most of the time with this MC, going all the way to thinking of himself as a criminal.
... She wasn't even attacking me anymore. It wasn't self defense. I am a criminal too.
Pokemon - Solo's Strange Journey
Video Games · BenisBoy14