I am have read up to chapter 205 so I will be rating it from there. This book has high potential, but it is very frustrating to read, there genuinely are good moments in this story,but you have to go through a mire of misunderstanding, clichés, and more BS. The characters are some of the most annoying parts of the story, the lack of communication is criminal half of the problem can be fixed with a reasonable talk or some common sense. If you want to read this you have to be able to wade through sooo much nonsense.
He literally just died💀
“Well then! It looks like the bodies of these people are stronger than those from my previous world. This Leylin is even inferior to a girl…..I’m starting to feel embarrassed for him…..”
Fantasy · The Plagiarist
Also thanks for the chapter
It was a good bing read but it can be very boring to go through at times. The author repeats a lot of info like the readers are slow, that really messes with the pacing. There is a notable lack nuance in the characters, making them seem one sided and boring. Other than that I like the power system u have set up and fact that the Mc has a job is a nice touch. Keep up the good work and improve when u can!!
Yea caught the same feeling
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Fantasy · Gladstone_
It allows you dash really fast. It the game is a fantastic early game item. Letting it’s user to rapidly avoid danger.
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Anime & Comics · Azazyel
You can see the mental degradation in one comment section. I love it!
...I had to admit that it was more than a bit awkward being breastfed though. While not my first time seeing an attractive woman's breast, it was definitely my first having it shoved in my face and sucking on it.
Anime & Comics · HappyVainGlory
apparition
This was not only due to the increase in his magic after merging with Boggart's blood, but also because his Transfiguration Charm had been upgraded to level five, greatly reducing the amount of magic required to cast it.
Book&Literature · Innocent Angel
apparition
"Disillusionment!"
Book&Literature · Innocent Angel
Thanks man 👨