Thanks for the chapter. In my opinion, this has the potential to be one of the greatest Naruto SI fics. As for this chapter, I especially like how the encounter with Akatsuki came to an end organically and with a small victory for the MC. Since you have made Fuji so strong early on, it'll probably be difficult to make the early antagonists a serious threat without nerfing him (that would suck). This battle was done well because Konan's interruption was believable and Fuji still secured the Third Kazekage's corpse. On the other hand he showed some of his cards to his enemies so that maybe something to keep in mind. Hope you find the motivation to continue!
ch 18 Info dump time ! Who likes info dumps ?
Anime & Comics · PrinceOfNilfheim
I've read this story of a likable (in my opinion) MC that has suffered in basically every chapter and been constantly dominated by every woman introduced and I have persisted because the author has been hyping this up in the comments by saying that it will get better soon and revenge will be sweet. I thought that after his identity was revealed it would get better but it would seem not. We got some leisure for the last few chapters but the extent of the "revenge" was a rapist sunbathing for a day and some callous words. Author do you just torturing the MC or will it actually get better? Well written otherwise but this is depressing and exhausting to read...
ch 43 Entrapment
Fantasy · GloriousRightFoot
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Thanks for the chapter. In my opinion, this has the potential to be one of the greatest Naruto SI fics. As for this chapter, I especially like how the encounter with Akatsuki came to an end organically and with a small victory for the MC. Since you have made Fuji so strong early on, it'll probably be difficult to make the early antagonists a serious threat without nerfing him (that would suck). This battle was done well because Konan's interruption was believable and Fuji still secured the Third Kazekage's corpse. On the other hand he showed some of his cards to his enemies so that maybe something to keep in mind. Hope you find the motivation to continue!
ch 18 Info dump time ! Who likes info dumps ?
Naruto: Soaring Above the Desert
Anime & Comics · PrinceOfNilfheim