Theresa_Robinson

Theresa_Robinson

female LV 15

I am me

2020-03-28 Bergabung United States
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Theresa_Robinson
Theresa_Robinson
8 days ago
Replied to redcats

not as bad as that pun.....

Theresa_Robinson
Theresa_Robinson
11 days ago
Replied to Poisontail

what about all the uncles?

Theresa_Robinson
Theresa_Robinson
11 days ago
Replied to Ninja1957

most definitely. How will her bio grandpa act if they all meet, I wonder? Since they all want her attention.

Master Jiang's full name was Jiang Zhongyu. He was an old friend of Master Leng, and he had been the head of National Antiques Association before, so he naturally had great affection towards antiques. Although he was retired now, he was still influential in the antique industry. Hearing that, Jiang Zhongyu was excited. "What? Zhao Mengfu's Luo Shen Fu? Really? You're a bad person that you call me now but tell me to visit you tomorrow! How will I be able to sleep tonight! No, I'm coming right away, and you must stay awake and wait for me!"

Reincarnation Of The Businesswoman At School

Reincarnation Of The Businesswoman At School

Urban · Su Nuanse

Theresa_Robinson
Theresa_Robinson
1 months ago
Replied to simh1998

what you just suggested effects other people. Innocent people.

Theresa_Robinson
Theresa_Robinson
6 months ago
Commented

last chapter, the name was Chen, and now it's Shen. what is the name supposed to be?

When it came to the Shen family's New Year's greetings, several of the Shen gentlemen were there in the living room. They were probably waiting for her to arrive, Yun Xi was taken aback to see the crowd.

Imperial Commander: His Pretty Wife Is Spoiled Rotten

Imperial Commander: His Pretty Wife Is Spoiled Rotten

Urban · Gu Jiaqi

Theresa_Robinson
Theresa_Robinson
6 months ago
Commented

Definitely need a new proof reader.

Theresa_Robinson
Theresa_Robinson
6 months ago
Commented

Needs a proofreader.

Theresa_Robinson
Theresa_Robinson
6 months ago
Commented

1. only 4 bottles, not 5 2. where is the other elixer?

Theresa_Robinson
Theresa_Robinson
6 months ago
Replied to Theresa_Robinson

Also, the comment at the bottom is not necessary for every single freaking short chapter. The chapters need to be longer and the section at the bottom can be placed on the main page in the about Books.

Theresa_Robinson
Theresa_Robinson
6 months ago
Posted

The story has potential. However The sentence structure and grammar need a lot of work. I don't know who the proof reader was, but they need to go back through it and try again.