Welp, we are getting some beautiful characterization instead of character development so far, but I'll take it either way. It's definitely living up to all the expectations.
thanks for the chapter. really curious how you are going portray a theater play in writing.
that is the vibe I'm getting
The GREAT Zirav Arashti - is a fantasy, a delusion created in a time where his presence hadn't left The Empire completely, and there should be no reason to keep that fantasy alive now, all this time later.
Fantasia · VoxEnozian
He seems to be getting a little riled up there. But maybe only in his head and he remains composed from the outside.
The GREAT Zirav Arashti - is a fantasy, a delusion created in a time where his presence hadn't left The Empire completely, and there should be no reason to keep that fantasy alive now, all this time later.
Fantasia · VoxEnozian
Good chapter. Thanks for writing!
Really good. Thanks for the chapter. Hope you'll continue!
It's good. Solid writing, focused on characters but not neglecting to give us some juice worldbuilding. No idea where the plot is going but there's only been 2 chapters out so far. Adrian has my attention! Give him some beautiful character development and this WN would be well on its way to being a favorite.
Very unexpected and lovely progression! Plot and worldbuilding are good and all but characters are the real deal! I'm glad you are focusing on your protagonist so much! The first half of ch 1 established his core very well and now here's some really likable progression. I don't know if I like him necessarily but I'm intrigued. Good job!
That's a lot of lore. Makes me excited for this story.
good chapter
The Emperor Who Would Rule The Gods
Fantasia · VoxEnozian