What an ungrateful girl . It is so ridiculous of her and arrogant too.
Very well done. Great details and a very vivid imagination. You can actually imagine the situation as you read the story. Good job.
It wasn’t just the Chu word that is annoying. It was that “Alas” word. It nice, but not if you used it after every incident.
Very good, the words are great too.? I can actually read it without correcting the grammar. Very nice, I am enjoying this story.
Really bad translation. Proof read, badly needed.
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Interesting, it keeps getting better and better.
Puzzling
Smooth
Xi Xiaye suddenly raised her head as a smile appeared across her beautiful face. Her eyes looked at him with genuine gratitude while she said quietly, "Thank you, Mu Yuchen. I'll do my best to be your wife."
Urban · Bei Chuan Yun Shang Jin
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" Mr. Feng, you came at the right time. I have something important to discuss with you. I'm going to the special training room for a month, but I don't have any academic credits. Rong Mo said that you can get me 300,000 academic credits, right? "
The Useless Consort Suddenly Makes A Comeback
Fantasy · Lian Jue