Overall the writing quality is good but personally if possible I would like the not mentioning rape and crippling of main character and support. Anyway the story is great has a nice them and while their is some problems with update I hope you continue this series
I like that you have dragon slayer magic but come on just buy props to save Bell aunt. As well as the other power system is not compatible with danmachi since it makes it to complicated. Focus on one power system and if you want to add those Chinese power system make with attack direction or you can use moon world Odin ruins. Well with Chinese you have to simply it since it is to complicated and annoying.
More chapters please
Why did this have a big time skip. Bell is still haven ’t mett lily and them
It fine if you want to add other supernatural worlds but dont complete change already made work to make it work. fate, highschool dxd, justsu kaisen are fine since they are modern times
The only thing is that probably you have to make travel time more since you make tanjiro go different places in a day
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original Traveling the Cosmos
A young man died in an unseemly way. As a result, he is trapped in the rift, which connects different realms. He is compensated with eight wishes and can travel to different worlds. He has always dreamed of doing this, and now he can. Let us see where his journey will take him through the multiverse. He is a selfish person that was a loner for most of his life.---I do not own any character except the main character. Don't expect this to be a great story. First time I have written a story.--- Also do not own cover-12 Chs 141 Koleksi
Just remember that an archer who can’t do close combat is not a good archer.
Multiverse Gacha
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