Arc_Valkyria

Arc_Valkyria

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Arc_Valkyria
Arc_Valkyria
2 years ago
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Here's the preference for the uniform.

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Leon sneaked up from a narrow alley and saw the yelling officer in command. The officer was wearing a hard-shelled greyish steel helmet and a sharp point designed in the edge, dirty brown military uniform with four pockets on it (two in the upper chest and two below the belly, parallel to each other), a black leather belt, hard light brown pants also with hard crossed bondage-like from the knee to the foot and a pair of leather brown shoe.

Voyage Into Revolution: Lychgate to War

Voyage Into Revolution: Lychgate to War

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Arc_Valkyria
Arc_Valkyria
2 years ago
Commented

This could be not highly accurate because I'm not an American myself so correct me if I'm wrong here about the "tank history." Reminder: The model is just for imagination and preferences purpose and understanding about the said topic/subject.

No planes flew by or ships swung across the deep-blue waters. The tank design was barely the same model of M1918—the first ever build tank in American history (Earth).

Voyage Into Revolution: Lychgate to War

Voyage Into Revolution: Lychgate to War

History · Arc_Valkyria

Arc_Valkyria
Arc_Valkyria
2 years ago
Posted

Pretty good start.. The story is quite interesting and it entertains me.. The writing style can be improve and keep updating.. I love the story so imma check this out💕

Arc_Valkyria
Arc_Valkyria
2 years ago
Posted

The novel is good! But we need more updates for more information about the story.. The way the flow of the story continues and is written is quite interesting. Hope the authors keep updating the novel💕

Arc_Valkyria
Arc_Valkyria
2 years ago
Posted

I'm not into romance but this novel piques my interest. It's really entertaining and the writing style got me into it. Overall, the story is great, character-wise is good, the setting is also good. No complaints here but it's a really good novel. Great work and keep updating! 💕💕

Arc_Valkyria
Arc_Valkyria
2 years ago
Replied to Cynical_Stranger

Thank you for the review and honest thoughts.. The current chapters are only fillers and I know there are some grammatical errors but this is my first novel. I'm still learning and improving my writing style. About the show and tell.. I do know that too yet I'm doing my best to adapt to it and later chapters will be slowly showing that style of writing.. The main story is still not shown because it was on the "filler stage" For now, it was quite generic tho.. I really appreciate your review💕

Arc_Valkyria
Arc_Valkyria
2 years ago
Posted

I'm not gonna lie.. The first sentence keeps me hooked and I got entertained as well.. I like the story and I'm not the type of guy who reads love romance genre but I will keep an eye for this book.. LOVE IT!💕

Arc_Valkyria
Arc_Valkyria
2 years ago
Posted

Great! I'm not gonna talk about the book cover but the story building of the novel will entertain you.. The character is well suited to the story.. I hope more updates from the author💕

Arc_Valkyria
Arc_Valkyria
2 years ago
Posted

WOW!! Great novel indeed.. One of the very good novels you can find.. Character wise is quite appealing and the story will keep you hooked.. I love it💕

Arc_Valkyria
Arc_Valkyria
2 years ago
Posted

I will be straightforward about this novel. It's great with an interesting storyline, the MC is not my type cuz I am a guy but overall the job that the author had done is a great effort already.. I will checking up on this book time to time💕

  • Voyage Into Revolution: Lychgate to War original

    Voyage Into Revolution: Lychgate to War

    History GENIUS KINGDOMBUILDING CONQUER HISTORICAL ADVANCEDTECHNOLOGY

    READ THE SYNOPSIS FIRST!! In the year 2032 of the modern-futuristic era Earth, an otaku and a military man, was killed in an incident after saving a little boy. Awakening in a child's body, he realizes he has been reincarnated in a world of guns and sorcery. _______________ The 28-years-old otaku is a simple military guy in service. Living in his house alone, without a girlfriend and a relative in contact. With his lonely life and the new world he had, will he use his ideas or let the world be in peril? _______________ In the year, 1901 from an alternative world, a newly born assigned identity of Leon Alexios-Leventis, poses a power of might in knowledge and magic, leaving the old rifles serving as the new scepter of magic guns and soaring into the era of unproven sorcery. [Historical accuracy is meant to be slightly to moderately changed—keep in mind, the novel universe of the story is an alternative universe or "SOMEWHAT" parallel to the real-world history.] [The Picture/Cover Image is not mine and is credit to the owner.]

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