dfkin_white

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dfkin_white
dfkin_white
dfkin_white
8 months ago
Commented

if you keep posting , with time, it will gain attraction . you shouldn't give up on it like that

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dfkin_white
dfkin_white
8 months ago
Posted

i hope you don't drop this fic , its one of a kind .

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dfkin_white
dfkin_white
1 years ago
Commented

nice , she got her redemption

dfkin_white
dfkin_white
1 years ago
Posted

it's becoming increasingly harder to read this . I was actually hoping the author could fix his writing . long chapters with long explanations that are useless for the plot

dfkin_white
dfkin_white
1 years ago
Posted

the only thing that bothers me is the length of the description and explanation of scenes . If you could try to tone it down, it would be a huge plus

dfkin_white
dfkin_white
1 years ago
Posted

😕 😒 the story is okay I guess, but, the lack of writing quality really puts me off.

dfkin_white
dfkin_white
1 years ago
Posted

dude wtf is wrong with you this is an abomination

dfkin_white
dfkin_white
2 years ago
Commented

sounds logical

Maybe one day something will happen that will let her have permanent white hair but now, this will be the idea.

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