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7 days ago
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Ahh...i see now. That's okay. Take your time learning

I'm not disregarding the language or anything, on the contrary, it's one that I'm very interested in learning, so I ask that you be patient with me, thank you to those who read it and I hope for your understanding.

Chimeras in the Marvel/DC

Chimeras in the Marvel/DC

Anime & Comics · Gabriel_music

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Odiator_Opoto
7 days ago
Commented

Is Evelyn a she or a he? Please stick with one pronoun.

To say that Evelyn was restless after all that would be a lie, she had never trained since she was born, and she thought she would never need to, she was born to protect this region,And in her first instance of invasion or something, she failed to detect the threat early, failed to gather what troops she had and rushed into her first attack, was overwhelmed in combat, He let a good soldier die and only managed to take a prisoner because she was already unconscious.

Chimeras in the Marvel/DC

Chimeras in the Marvel/DC

Anime & Comics · Gabriel_music

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Odiator_Opoto
13 days ago
Commented

If MC has read lord of the mysteries, he would know about the outer gods. It's inevitable that he'll think of them during his first moments of realising where he is and consequently, they would have noticed him. That's one plot hold i can recognise off the bat. Do you have hidden explanations for that? a connection to the abyss perhaps 🙃

A/N - Please tell me if there are errors or grammatical mistakes. So yeah most of the introduction is copied from Lord of The Mysteries: Fire of Destruction because well I didn't know how else to give my MC the chained pathway formula, you should go read it; it's an enjoyable read.

Lord of The Mysteries: Chained

Lord of The Mysteries: Chained

Book&Literature · Moriarty_Sherlock

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Odiator_Opoto
27 days ago
Commented

I'd like this

Buku ini telah dihapus.
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Odiator_Opoto
1 months ago
Commented

Why indeed.

(A/N: Why do I have to keep shooting myself in the foot with this complicated and toxic relationship? This is frying my brain.)

Forgotten Souls (JJK)

Forgotten Souls (JJK)

Anime & Comics · ImSadge

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Odiator_Opoto
1 months ago
Commented

Nice chapter

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Odiator_Opoto
1 months ago
Commented

Honestly, I've been waiting for a fanfiction with Kenjaku as the MC for a long time. I love what you're doing here. The story is really good. I wish we had more frequent updates but if this is what you can do to have this quality, I'm okay with it too.

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Odiator_Opoto
1 months ago
Commented

Who's willing to bet that that's the cat woman from early chapters?

Just then, a figure caught his attention—a woman in a sleek, dark dress who had been eyeing him from across the room. She moved with an air of practiced elegance, clearly someone of influence. The agent felt a twinge of caution. Was she part of Marshall, Carter, and Dark Ltd., perhaps an additional layer of their security, sensing something off about him?

Marvel: The Foundation

Marvel: The Foundation

Movies · Darkstar_crow