JerryI

JerryI

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2020-01-10 Bergabung Global
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JerryI
JerryI
1 days ago
Replied to Axes

What kind of nonsense is this? Have you reread the fanfiction? To react to a bullet, you need to be faster than a bullet, name at least one hero faster than a bullet.

JerryI
JerryI
3 days ago
Commented

A nanosuit that is not protected from EMP? He's useless.

JerryI
JerryI
4 days ago
Posted

I can criticize a lot, from why you need to combine the abilities of two versions of superman, to the fact that mc is absolutely useless, he's just a cardboard box that doesn't represent anything, he hasn't changed anything in his life, and just follows the "plot", my conclusion is very bad, very lazy. I gave you one star more for your efforts.

JerryI
JerryI
4 days ago
Commented

I can criticize a lot, from why you need to combine the abilities of two versions of superman, to the fact that mc is absolutely useless, he's just a cardboard box that doesn't represent anything, he hasn't changed anything in his life, and just follows the "plot", my conclusion is very bad, very lazy.

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JerryI
JerryI
6 days ago
Replied to Ben_Fraguela

But I care, can the author specify the original title?

JerryI
JerryI
6 days ago
Commented

It's actually amazing, because most heroes die from a single bullet, so their abilities don't justify the cost of training them when you can just train a squad of ordinary soldiers who will be cheaper and more effective, probably any hero except the defensive type or the almighty will die from a single bullet

JerryI
JerryI
6 days ago
Commented

It's too sugary a prologue for a fanfiction about getting into the world of superheroes, I bet parents won't play a role in future adventures.

JerryI
JerryI
6 days ago
Commented

When will the author have the conscience to leave a link to the original?

JerryI
JerryI
7 days ago
Commented

It's worth just destroying all those infected with the joker virus, it's still not a joke, since he knows about bcs