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12 days ago
Replied to Jason2010

Then why are you reading a Harry Potter fanfic?

Every thought vanished in lucas' head the moment he heard her name. The next moment everything he knew about her came back; a part of the golden trio, the bookworm of Gryffindor, a know-it-all and a stunning woman in the future. In short: somebody he needed.

Harry Potter: outlier

Harry Potter: outlier

Book&Literature · ViolentCloud

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ViolentCloud
12 days ago
Replied to Jason2010

You do know that when I wrote "somebody he needed" it meant someone to manipulate/abuse/deceive. She is not a love interest in any sense.

Every thought vanished in lucas' head the moment he heard her name. The next moment everything he knew about her came back; a part of the golden trio, the bookworm of Gryffindor, a know-it-all and a stunning woman in the future. In short: somebody he needed.

Harry Potter: outlier

Harry Potter: outlier

Book&Literature · ViolentCloud

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ViolentCloud
12 days ago
Replied to Jason2010

Why?

Every thought vanished in lucas' head the moment he heard her name. The next moment everything he knew about her came back; a part of the golden trio, the bookworm of Gryffindor, a know-it-all and a stunning woman in the future. In short: somebody he needed.

Harry Potter: outlier

Harry Potter: outlier

Book&Literature · ViolentCloud

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ViolentCloud
22 days ago
Commented

our -> the, it sounded strange because it's not a first person pov

ViolentCloud
ViolentCloud
22 days ago
Commented

*their -> his the first one and the third one

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ViolentCloud
1 months ago
Replied to king_of_kings666

That's not happening xD

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ViolentCloud
5 months ago
Replied to Helios_Sol

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ViolentCloud
6 months ago
Commented

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'What are you?', he thought back on Holly's eyes flashing the same purple it had a year ago. It did not make any sense.

Harry Potter: outlier

Harry Potter: outlier

Book&Literature · ViolentCloud

ViolentCloud
ViolentCloud
6 months ago
Commented

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'What are you?', he thought back on Holly's eyes flashing the same purple it had a year ago. It did not make any sense.

Harry Potter: outlier

Harry Potter: outlier

Book&Literature · ViolentCloud

ViolentCloud
ViolentCloud
7 months ago
Replied to Ka1serMax

You are not very attentive, are you?

As the other students trickled into the classroom, Lucas couldn't help but notice Hannah and Susan taking seats not too far from him. The former's expression was inscrutable, her gaze flickering between him and the window with a hint of suspicion. The other students were also stealing glances at his desk and whispering. The rumours had started to spread.

Harry Potter: outlier

Harry Potter: outlier

Book&Literature · ViolentCloud