LUZIR

LUZIR

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I like a cold coffee with milk in the morning

2020-01-03 Bergabung Global
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LUZIR
LUZIR
2 years ago
Posted

he has a terrible problem about how relationships are handled in this fic, each relationship is full of too many thoughts and unnecessary drama with each servant having a totally different point of view but the guys talk like example francis as if their primitive point of view and cold is correct when it is not, spirits like drake just because they are spirits and live a life with a narrow point of view already assumes that their thoughts are above others they are a terribly arrogant personality that the author took out balls, the mc is just terrible, a simp who is like a horny dog ​​who can't control his hormones and has a distressing state of mind all the time with unnecessary thoughts, it's a slow and distressing read full of drama and love triangles where you will have to wait more than 500 for mc to be worth a little where he follows the letter and what they tell him where they even instill in him a primitive way of thinking itive that the servants lived without knowing that they are not right, mc is a puppy that wags its tail for drake where mc gave him here a questionable personality where he went down the path of the 'logical' when they completely rule out that a woman strong and independent she cannot respect herself and value herself without valuing her body a little with the pride that she would have sleeping with more men than the cheapest prostitute.

LUZIR
LUZIR
LUZIR
LUZIR
LUZIR
3 years ago
Commented

don't you want cang yue? you miss it

LUZIR
LUZIR
3 years ago
Commented

cool

LUZIR
LUZIR
3 years ago
Replied to Ph4

Huh… that’s cool

LUZIR
LUZIR
LUZIR
3 years ago
Replied to Lazy_Apostle

If everything you have said comes to pass I will withdraw my review and give it 5 stars but if you follow the canon to the letter like now and almost nothing changes where zeus gets his way with 90% of goddesses I really will not be disappointed but you, I hope that everything you hope will happen really happens but I will not be disappointed

LUZIR
LUZIR
3 years ago
Replied to Lazy_Apostle

I sincerely doubt that the author changes anything, so far nothing has changed and mc only has hestia and kratos in mind, if author san does not have the balls to kill zeus minimo do everything possible to minimize the crimes of zeus, well, everyone So they want Diana to be smart and create a situation where Zeus only rapes Hipolita and not many others and there it is! and they save them, they never focus on them and it makes me a bit sad and if they love their daughters so much, give them to them too so that everyone agrees, if there is someone in the world who can ignore morality, it is the gods.

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