Wait, I didn't know about this. Is this on all chapters or just some? If it is all, then I'd like to apologize as this is out of my control. I don't set things up when it comes to that. Webnovel does.
Shameless Author review 5 star. Thanks for reading, hope you enjoyed. Also thanks to the people that supported this. It is greatly appreciated.
Hello. Moe here. I won't be sweet talking since I'd like to give out a honest opinion on this. My overall total score for this would be a 3.0. As stated by the others, the writing quality... simply just ruins it a lot. Improper placements of periods, comas, exclamations, and the like. Grammar problems and sentence structure being all over the place. I'm telling this now, even Grammarly won't save this. The reason is simple. the writing style that is seemed to be here would be something like akin to that of a script. When one reads a script, it would often be stiff. Because it is written with the intention to perform, not to read. This is like that in a lot of cases. A quick suggestion to fix this is to read other people's works first. See how it is written, structured, and styled. After that, try to implement it to your work. then compare. Another reason why i said that Grammarly may not even save it is because, based on where you want to place your writing. It appears to be a mix of first person and third person. And as Grammarly stands, it sucks at recognizing that. With that point done the other points can then follow suite. Since the writing quality is the main issue. If that has a problem, story development, character design, and world background then get's affected. Overall souring the reader's experience and causing them to may drop the work for another. If that can be fixed, then my rating may change. But for now, it stands to stay on this number.
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The writing quality that, i can improve on and your other point as well. but sadly. i don't decide the prices. Webnovel does. each chapter is written on 2000 - 2100 words each. webnovel places a coin each 200 words. Sorry, but i really can't change the prices for the chapter.
yeah I know it's slow. can't help it since college projects gotta go first
an actually good loophole. has the same energy as naming an agricultural company as Samsung.
English and Grammar is appropriate. Minimum errors on all current chapters which is good. As it does not have that much chapters, an appropriate review for plot, character, and world background would not be given. However, for a beginning, it would be overall be better than an good amount of works already. Keep up the good work. Happy writing!
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Heavenly Kingdom: The Kingdom among the clouds
Fantasy · moecyanpile
one word, contract it will be republished soon.
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original Chaos Eyes
4.68 Baru Diperbarui
In a planet we called earth in year 2020 a catastrophe accured in different parts of the world in which a dimensional rift opened making way for creatures which is called chaos beings to invade our planet killing millions of people along the way. inspite of the world's government successfully defending the planet they still fear the second coming of these invaders. Thus the government formed a secret organization that will one day defeat the chaos beings and they called it Defenders. In year 2030 ten years after the catastrophe that shook the world a teenager named Jhin Kaizaki a survivor of the catastrophe found himself in a peculiar situation wherein he found himself having an ability to see the future.... Follow Kaizaki everyday life as it changes and knows the reason why he can see the future (Picture not mine. but the edit is mine. just saw it on Google. if the original artist saw this. pls tell me so that I can put the credit to you)269 Chs 287 Koleksi
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Transported In Another World As A LoL Summoner
4.28 Baru Diperbarui
Shun Kurosaki a normal highschool student suddenly got transported to another world of swords and magic with no hints at all. When he arrived he noticed a book right next to him and found out from the book that he became a summoner. Hearing that he got isekai'd a dream of every Otaku and Gamers he suddenly noticed a catch I his summoning "He can only summon League Of Legends Champions!" Follow Shun's journey in a world of fantasy and witness how he interacts with the champions from League of Legends credits to #Riot games League of legends team (Picture not mine. but the edit is mine. just saw it on Google. if the original artist saw this. pls tell me so that I can put the credit to you)306 Chs 1.8k Koleksi
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I'll become a villain in my next life
3.31
"Why? I tried to help people but they just abandoned me! betrayed me! they don't want me to play hero!? then fine I'll be the villain" Those are the last words of 'Riruko Kaido' codename: Ragnarok, a level 5 Esper with the power to control matter and elements as long as has knowledge of the subject as he died from the hands of the very people he protects he was betrayed by his friends, abandoned by his lover, and sold out to the researchers by the very person he trusted...... follow Riruko Kaido as he live out his life in another world with a determination to become a villain.... will he be able to maintain his word to become a villain? or will his past personality preserve the goodness in his heart? will he be a villain or a hero? (Picture not mine. but the edit is mine. just saw it on Google. if the original artist saw this. pls tell me so that I can put the credit to you)458 Chs 1.1k Koleksi
what the bloody damn. I'm really sorry about that. I have no power when it comes to that. all I can say now is that I'm disappointed at Webnovel.
Heavenly Kingdom: The Kingdom among the clouds
Fantasy · moecyanpile