I cannot update chapters after going premium. I've tried serval times to improve everything. I have an updated version of this first volume with the improved grammar but Webnovel just refuses to let me fix it
Alton's eyes widen as a large truck was thrown into the alley. He looked up in dismay as the car toppled towards him. With no way of getting out with his back against the corner and injured his chance of escape was almost none, Alton tried getting up but fell back down again gasping for trapped air. His eyes were met with the truck as he was without a doubt about to be crushed to death. In that small moment, his eyes darted around, looking for a means of escape. That's when his eyes met with a drainage pipe. Although not a pleasant way out, it was a way out nonetheless. Kicking the tube with all his might, it burst as water spilt all over the floor. Collapsing to the ground, his hand touched the water, turning it to thin and slippery ice. As his body impacted on the basis, he was sent flying forward. Missing the truck by the skin of his teeth, he shot up into the air throwing a punch at Gale.
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Fantasy · Nightfall_Protocol
You're making my job going back through this so easy lol
"Huh? Is that you're girlfriend or something?" Zinnia yelled, keeping up with her karaoke session of Michael Jackson Beat it.
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Fantasy · Nightfall_Protocol
she wants to hide the fact she's an orphan
"oh, umm, yeah. She's my sister. Bingo."
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Fantasy · Nightfall_Protocol
Alton is the oldest at 19. Zinnia is two years younger, with Gale being the same age. The majority of characters are around this age, apart from Iris and her sister, who are thirteen.
"There you are Alton; you weren't at the meeting spot so I thought I'd come looking for you." Alton turned, seeing Zinnia in her school uniform. This apprised of a black skirt which was just above her knees, a white polo shirt with a red tie alongside a red blazer which was buttoned up. She also had her pink hair down into short pigtails.
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Fantasy · Nightfall_Protocol
That's what I was going for! [img=recommend]
Alton sat back down, generally feeling quite stupid. He smirked, trying to play off the act. Why should I care if that streamer is outside? Makes no difference to me, he thought playing the act off. His eyes drifted back down to his phone as he was trapped in the moment once again. Pokiero was now slouched over reading the chat through her phone. She gave a soft laugh holding her hand under her chin. "You guys are all too sweet. You flatter me too much." The voice was like an angel whispering sweet nothings in Alton's ear as he was flustering up just over it. Pokiero scrunched up the rubbish tossing it in the bin as she stood up stretching. She wiped her mouth almost suggestively making the chat go wild. That's when it happened—the first sound of a ping. Pokierofan111 donated $20. Another ping. Viral_lover77 donated $45. The pings kept coming in like a bell as the donations kept piling up each outdoing each other until the latest one. Rougebeast543 donated $350.
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Fantasy · Nightfall_Protocol
Like show the gameplay on screen, but it's actually a few seconds behind, so people can't always see where they are 100% of the time
"Stream sniping is when someone joins the stream with the whole purpose to sabotage the streamer in question's session. Taking crimes down before the streamer does, or worst-case scenario, they attack the streamer in question as their location is always known. Cheap moves and difficult to stop. It was easy enough in video games as the streamer's name could be hidden, and they could just delay the gameplay by a few seconds. But in the real world. Isn't that simple."
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Fantasy · Nightfall_Protocol
I'm a fan of the show yes. Gale is very much like Stain for that reason all be it less killing and more putting people in hospital
If he really wanted to go that far. Yes
Thanks!
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In a world full of superhumans with fantastical abilities the idea of superheroes is seen as nothing more than childish dreams. The superheroes are instead streamers, people stream their crime-fighting ordeals for the world with the whole reason of getting rich and famous, nothing more, nothing less. The concept of great power means great responsibility is thrown out the window for a new era of supers. Alton Brantley is one such person. Working two part-time jobs to make ends meet he keeps his powers a secret not wanting the burdens of his past to define him. This changes however when he is met by a larger than life girl Zinnia, she dreams of being a real-life superhero like the ones of old. Forming Team Rhapsody they begin to climb the ranks gaining new allies in order to become the most famous streamers the world has ever seen.348 Chs 2.8k Koleksi
It is unfortunate. The grammar does improve somewhat later on. However, I was the only one working on this writing and uploading every day at the points, so I never had the chance to fix the issues fully. If you do not read this because of that, I understand and appreciate that you took the time to give this one a chance.
Alton's eyes widen as a large truck was thrown into the alley. He looked up in dismay as the car toppled towards him. With no way of getting out with his back against the corner and injured his chance of escape was almost none, Alton tried getting up but fell back down again gasping for trapped air. His eyes were met with the truck as he was without a doubt about to be crushed to death. In that small moment, his eyes darted around, looking for a means of escape. That's when his eyes met with a drainage pipe. Although not a pleasant way out, it was a way out nonetheless. Kicking the tube with all his might, it burst as water spilt all over the floor. Collapsing to the ground, his hand touched the water, turning it to thin and slippery ice. As his body impacted on the basis, he was sent flying forward. Missing the truck by the skin of his teeth, he shot up into the air throwing a punch at Gale.
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Fantasy · Nightfall_Protocol