CrazyWhale

probably not, because there are some stories that I care more about, but I can't afford them.

1) the second interlude was long and was indirectly linked to the MC, I lost interest in reading that part 2) the mc will be less annoying in some parts, and I don't like a system that forces you to do things and responds to its host. 3) it depends more on the author, but the speed of your story is good, not slow or fast. 4 and 5 are beyond my capabilities :( These are just my opinions, and overall I liked the story, and I hope I was clear, as I use a translator to write xD

Hello, I was reviewing my library yesterday and removing the stories that have already been abandoned or the ones that I would never read again, while I see some stories that marked me, and this was one of them, I hope you have fun writing it as much as I have fun reading it. or rereading. sorry about my English

me too, the 'human or humanoid form' kills my interest in reading, as it seems like I'm reading any other 95% of the stories, in this case some human MC who found a sea king zoan devil fruit. Well, good reading for those who continue, sorry for my english.

and because it has the power of intangibility, it can become an excuse for being able to 'swim'

an alternative version of horo horo no mi, gaining intangibility and being able to float out of the water, and the ghosts would be a 'baby' version of the MC that are hidden in its tentacles, functioning similar to the pokémon dragapult, can mistake him for a mother, until he sees him 'throwing' his children and blowing up their faces

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not understand humans and understand the Palico, but still unable to speak with the Palico. an idea that crossed my mind :v

I don't like human form, but the others are interesting