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I paid two fast passes for this repeated chapter. You should first remove this chapter or pit a warning in title heading that it's a repeat chapter. You will earn the respect of your readers with this, and more of us will stick to your story till the end.
[The Metal Detector is looking at you.]
Fantasy · Cosmic_Ceaser
Epic comeback!
The surroundings suddenly experienced a drop in pressure. Above the courtyard a dark cloud quickly formed, cackling with thunder and flashing lightning, he continued, "I am the storm."
Fantasy · JPNovelFan
protected the line *until* the reinforcements
The Dragal demons' abyssal legion that included towering behemoths with skin as hard as stone, fell to ash before his sword. He held steadfast and protected the line before reinforcements could come.
Fantasy · JPNovelFan
She became what she hated in the end and got what she deserved in the end, because even if he avenged her father for her having to see, hear, and feel the peace and happiness his family had day in and day out she would end up hating and resenting them for their happiness. The little girl that she felt pity for she would start to feel it was all her fault if she would have just opened her mouth and told them what kind of things they had been doing her and her father wouldn't have stood up for them and the tragedy that befell her family would not have occurred an he'd still be alive. Then, she would have tried to find ways to sabotage the compound and to achieve what she had just tried to do.
Why did this person change so quickly! Just now begging for help, now seeking revenge.
Sci-fi · Six Leeks
Whether your own depictions or a ready made one on the internet, have to say spot on!!!
A considerable landslide occurred in the middle of the horde, dividing it into two parts. The landslide engulfed the demons in its path, pushing the lower part of the horde down the mountainside, burying hundreds of them.
Fantasy · Redsunworld
Bad ass pic, all the way!!! ty
Arasbus was at the rear of the high demonic horde. Although the Abyssal was a mighty and fierce warrior, he was not foolish. Like most demons, his tactical mind was not exceptional, but he always knew to let the weaker ones go first so they could clear the path of traps and drain the enemy's energy.
Fantasy · Redsunworld
because he had allotted* so much OR* *due to the allotment* of so much
Pure bliss appeared on Vlad's face as he saw how much his body had advanced as he relocated so much Origin Force into his flesh and blood.
Fantasy · Redsunworld
And another repeated chapter in the next one? What the hell, and it's really the third time that the chapter is going to appear next. The first honest time, the second in this chapter, when you combined the prior 2 chapters into one and then separating it for the third repeat!!!
Apocalyptic Reincarnation: Start with a 30-million Bonus
Sci-fi · Six Leeks