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We just have different opinions I guess. But to me this just showed that the MC isn't any better than the guy that tried to recruit Yuna 2 chapters ago. He doesn't care about the girls he cares about the fame and money they will bring him and nothing more. Which isn't any different than that guy from last chapter

Well that was quite anticlimactic. The way it was brought up and resolved wasn't good imo. It lacked everything basically. It's like you wrote those few paragraphs just to get this over with. It didn't seem realistic (even from this novel's POV) at all.

Haha, no worries, also sorry If some of my replies were a bit too aggressive xD. I just got a little invested.

Maybe, I don't know your plans for the novel so I can't really say if it's too fast. I wouldn't consider it fast paced, but I think that's defined differently by each person.

Not really xD. It just gives off the vibe as if this will be a reoccuring thing that's all. You better believe that I want to like the novel. And so far it's good. I was just giving my opinion on the ending nothing more.

Well it will start from where they were before this happened, so...

This doesn't make me optimistic at all lol. It sounds as if you are going to do the same thing again. But hey maybe the novel just isn't for me and I don't have to dwell on it

And from her reaction I am almost certain that she thinks that it was a dream no matter if it actually was. That's the main reason why to me it was ruined. It isn't important for the reader to know if it's real but the participants to know. And maybe I am reading too much into and and making something small into a big deal, so take all of this with a grain of salt.

You're right it is, but I just really dislike things like that. Illusions, dreams and whatnot. In every other novel they are given as reason to basically reset the progress back to 0 regardless of what they did. So it just makes way for misunderstandings, at least that's how I see things. And it doesn't make me hopeful for future lemons where things like that can make MC or FLs misunderstand or postpone things because they thought what they had experienced wasn't real. Well sorry for the rant xD

Well to me the lemon is ruined then, but oh well.

She almost seems like a yandere from how she said that no one can take her away from him, so layalty is there xD. So no complaints, I like that that of clingyness.

Bruh if that was a dream then the lemon is wasted imo.

She isn't wrong xD. Also I like how she immediately gets flustered.

Well, if that happens, I am dropping immediately. I hate separations