TheSystemFan

TheSystemFan

male LV 5

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2019-09-12 Bergabung Global
Lencana 11

Moments 2278
TheSystemFan
TheSystemFan
2 months ago
Commented

The mc seems pretty weak for having powers of Thor. Bullets shouldn't do anything to him and only Homelander may be able to hurt him.

TheSystemFan
TheSystemFan
5 months ago
Commented

1

TheSystemFan
TheSystemFan
6 months ago
Commented

+1

TheSystemFan
TheSystemFan
7 months ago
Posted

Really liked this story. Most of the stories here are not so well written but this is not the case here. Also shows some realistic development without any cheats or golden finger.

TheSystemFan
TheSystemFan
8 months ago
Commented

So the language seems flowery and long winded.

TheSystemFan
TheSystemFan
8 months ago
Posted

I was reading 1st chapter but hit in the face with a block of words. It was incoherent and difficult to read.

TheSystemFan
TheSystemFan
8 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter.

TheSystemFan
TheSystemFan
8 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter. Though the flowery language seems a bit too much

TheSystemFan
TheSystemFan
TheSystemFan
9 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapters. His hero name could be Apex.