Imperial_Fox

Imperial_Fox

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very lazzyyyyyyy

2019-09-07 Bergabung India
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Imperial_Fox
Imperial_Fox
Imperial_Fox
20 hours ago
Commented

iIfeel like I've read this story a couple years back, are you copying or uts a translation?

Imperial_Fox
Imperial_Fox
1 days ago
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"Your solution to everything cannot be 'more firepower,'" Khaine admonished.

The Primarch of Liberty

The Primarch of Liberty

Anime & Comics · Shiro_Kusanagi_69

Imperial_Fox
Imperial_Fox
5 days ago
Replied to RoshNur

You take the story forward very slowly. Keeping MC stuck, and in turn the readers. In the starting chapters, there's nothing present to hook the readers in by anything, MC just keeps being a pussy and a Wimp in front of his boss, even after having potentially world changing powers. he just keeps plotting without taking action. this leaves a bad taste in the mouth of most readers who want instant gratification of revenge or MCs development. most readers won't even read past the first few chapters due to it. and even if they do, your MC's character and thinking is way too one dimensional. as such, you leave little room for character development.

Imperial_Fox
Imperial_Fox
Imperial_Fox
5 days ago
Commented

All the inner monologuing is just boring, and very predictable. the air of mystery you wanna create isn't forming.

Imperial_Fox
Imperial_Fox
5 days ago
Commented

You think it's cool, but it ain't, it's just plain confusing

Imperial_Fox
Imperial_Fox
Imperial_Fox
5 days ago
Commented

Hasn't broke the fourth wall even once yet

Imperial_Fox
Imperial_Fox
5 days ago
Commented

Keeps getting more confusing and worse...

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