KarthikeyanRam

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KarthikeyanRam
KarthikeyanRam
1 years ago
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Hi , first Mahabharat is a religious text and Mahabharat tells us about the different ways of life people and also how to deal with different situations and the way your story is moving is not correct. Do u know that the previous life of karna he was a Great demon who got a boon from Bhrama of having 1000 divine armors and Nar means Human and that in present is Arjun and Narayana fought him and destroyed 999 armora after some thousands of years and last one was given to Lord Surya as u see the Mahabharata you read or seen may not be fully detailed and there are many intricate connections and explanation in other religous text about why and how, so you to read it in detail and about eklavya there is another reason that he is a part of the kingdom that belongs to Jarasand who also known for his atrocities and there multiple reasons. One should always see the humiliation and the negativity but u need learn that these are already depicted so that we know what to do when we face that type of situation other issue by writing this fan-fic u are undermining the knowledge and teaching of Guru , do think many Gurus don't know about these things and also what I want to say please stop here , you may want write a story where karna has good life but u need to know there is a reason for everything to happen and also I am not saying what happened karna is right but at the end u need to that where God he himself came down to keep the Dharma . Do just see the Mahabharata as story and u can write it as a Fan-fic , belive me what u are doing now nothing but insult and defamation please stop here and what u are doing is wrong and My advice first in detail about Mahabharat and also why and what does it represents . And please heed my advice and stop here.

KarthikeyanRam
KarthikeyanRam
3 years ago
Commented

It is different from other novels. I like it.

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    Black Star Angel

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    A boy achieved everything without anybody help with his sole hardwork and his lonely self.But because he is an orphan and nobody without any background been beaten into pulp by a young master for his seat in the university and thrown in the world's dangerous place. Who knows it lead him to fully complete his soul ,and once again the story of the most powerful ancient one begins . !!! Hii hello to everyone I am a amateur and it's my first novel.I hope every one can enjoy it while reading ,if any mistakes are there please pardon me ,and I will to better myself from time and let's enjoy ourselves.

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