"Right! I was right to wait for you... You could see the big picture from just some little details. But you are also very wrong." Jue Shi smiled meaningfully. "Thieving Heaven is not a demon venerable but an immortal venerable!"
Reverend Insanity - Verdant Heart Seed
Book&Literature · ThunderTaters
Ning Ze shook his head, "You, you, you are still just a woman."
Mysteries of Immortal Puppet Master
Eastern · Gu Zhen Ren
The 'original feeling' is bad character writing for the sake of fan service. If you could make something read better when translating, then isn't that the whole point? Gu Ziyi changed from an intelligent, patient, and humble young man into a lecherous tool simply to justify him having multiple relationships with women that he isn't even interested in. They don't really enhance or challenge the story or his character, respectively, in any meaningful way. If you can make simple edits of interactions that ultimately lead to nothing, then why not?
Seeing Ning Shuangjiang open her mouth to call out her soul skill, he opened his mouth and directly blocked hers with his own without thinking. (N/E: Please don't be as much of a jerk as Gu Ziyi, this is harassment and is punishable as a crime in most countries.)
Douluo: Starting with a self-created soul ring
Anime & Comics · KlopsKLDP
Shouldn't it be Zinger World?
Astral World—Accel Hurl x2!
I'll Surpass The MC
Eastern · Anvelope
Just rewrite it so he headbutts her. This is just for shock value and is out of character.
Seeing Ning Shuangjiang open her mouth to call out her soul skill, he opened his mouth and directly blocked hers with his own without thinking. (N/E: Please don't be as much of a jerk as Gu Ziyi, this is harassment and is punishable as a crime in most countries.)
Douluo: Starting with a self-created soul ring
Anime & Comics · KlopsKLDP
N/E: I'm going to owe you the 4th Chapter, the computer is having problems with the internet and I can't finish writing, sorry.
Douluo: Starting with a self-created soul ring
Anime & Comics · KlopsKLDP
It's throughout the chapter after the Soul Skill is introduced
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Douluo: Starting with a self-created soul ring
Anime & Comics · KlopsKLDP
life-saving method*
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Douluo: Starting with a self-created soul ring
Anime & Comics · KlopsKLDP
Shouldn't it be named Restriction not Retention?
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Douluo: Starting with a self-created soul ring
Anime & Comics · KlopsKLDP
That's... one way of looking at it I guess.
As if Jue Shi hasn't heard her, he stared into the far distance. "It was Heavenly Court who gave him this unpleasant title." His face contorted. "Master was a righteous person! He only took what he needed and spared the lives of people. He did not wish harm upon this world, his only goal was to return home."
Reverend Insanity - Verdant Heart Seed
Book&Literature · ThunderTaters