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Love the Idea and Love the Execution. My Runes(Power Stones) are yours.

Does sound interesting. I just hope you put the same amount of creativity into the original just as you’ve done this fic. The whole Demon King/Devil Prince of Hell troupe is a very common plot that lots of authors use for their original stories, so sometimes they end up being boring or cliche. But from the way you’ve written this story I’d say that won’t be an issue. Btw is it Daemon is or is it actually Daemom? Ive never heard that name.

Author would you not consider maybe post less but making the chapters bigger? I don’t really mind waiting longer but it feels like the chapters end before I even start getting into them.

TFTC

Thx for the chapter. Quick question how do you go about planning the next volume. Do you plan out every event in detailed order, or do you just write and see where the wind takes you ?

No i agree. I like the fact that Asterion is still strong but you have essentially constructed a story where he still faces challenges even with his strength. And you added in a blend of mystery into Herpo and left the readers curious for more. Very Well executed.

Great chapter and great fic. Love it

Would have like to see some actual dialogue between Edward and the Asgardians. To establish their characters well initially. It felt very brief and just a summary of an events before the chapter ended.

Ye I get what you mean, I’m annoyed aswell when mc’s go on this grand journey but completely forget about love romance and kids, because those aspects are a natural part of a story. I actually like the fact that your Mc had kids and is such a good father but I would like to occasionally see some development that is ‘Main character exclusive’ if you get what I mean. Like in your Daeron the good story, I have to go the auxiliary chapter to find out who the people in the chapter are, because you mc has so many wives and children haha 😅. But Its obvious from the get go that was the direction your story was going, so I’m not gonna give out. Overall I love your stories and I will gladly read them and your future projects.

Of course I understand. Anybody reading the story early on should kinda know what there getting themselves into. What ideas do you want, for your Martel story or the Daeron the good story ? Cuz I have a few for both .

What I mean by personal development is just that, the MC. In both of your stories the chapters are just filled with his sons, children and wives and the interactions between them, whether they be slice of life or lemons. The children and wives are becoming a central theme in your stories. I’m not saying thats bad, I just wish there would be more focus on the main character himself and his development throughout the story. When you combine so many different characters and plot lines all at the same time, you kinda of take away from the mc and his importance. That just my opinion and it doesn’t mean I don’t like the stories, it’s just a matter of preference.