jfernandez_2852 - Profile

Geeta has been one of my least favorite champions in the games. This version however is amazing. If this was how she was in the game she would be one of my favorites. Great job on turning a poorly written character into an incredibly likable one

Take all the time you need. Sorry for your losses. Losing one pet is hard, 3 is awful. Grieve all you need we will still be here when you are ready. Thank you

I'm sorry but this is a serious asspull. I really dislike when an author realizes they made their oc too strong and suddenly they have to uber ramp all the other characters artificially to create tension. Maybe you will drop a reasonable explanation in a few chapters but honestly until then it just feels really forced

Loved the story. Thank you so much

Honestly a major problem with a lot of stories is that they don't know when to end. So I have to respect that you have found your appropriate cut off point and made the hard choice to stop. Thank you for the awesome story up to this point and I look forward to seeing what you create in the future too.

Sounds good. Thanks for the heads up

Myth* typos suck

You do know that whole working out young stunts your growth thing is a muth right? That only happens if you damage your bones and they don't heal properly

Honestly is there anything more satisfying than killing danzo. Thanks for the chapter

Completely understand. Thanks for the heads up.

I feel like the story could have gone either way but we are now firmly on the harem route.

I like idea 1. Totally spies and Kim possible is such a natural combination and I like it. I read a fanfic where Ron split off from team possible moved to Beverly hills and acted as secret backup to the spies and it was awesome. If you could write your own spin on that concept it would be perfect

No.

The persona story sounds best to me personally. Please and thank you.