ImZephyr

ImZephyr

male LV 2

Professional Binge-Reader & Lurker

2019-07-16 Bergabung United States
Lencana 5

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ImZephyr
ImZephyr
18 days ago
Posted

Great LOTM fanfic, having read the mtl the story is really good and doesn't really have any OOC moments. Stays true to the original setting but also adds new plot lines that don't feel out of place. Only disappointing thing was the ending which to me at least felt a little fast and unsatisfying. Great story overall!

ImZephyr
ImZephyr
18 days ago
Replied to StrangeGod

漫威:我能召唤英雄联盟 is the original name

ImZephyr
ImZephyr
1 years ago
Commented

Take your time! This is a great story but your personal life is still more important no matter what.

ImZephyr
ImZephyr
2 years ago
Posted

The idea is really solid however the story is held back by the writing everything comes off as a brief summary of what happened not an actual story usually just get a brief description about what took place when characters interact. If you can get over the writing and progression issues then you might enjoy the story for what it is, however its not for me.

ImZephyr
ImZephyr
2 years ago
Commented

all I could think about lol

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ImZephyr
ImZephyr
2 years ago
Posted

Compared to a lot of stories on webnovel this is by no means terrible. But the MC is just kind of there, he doesn't really do anything. So far seems like the author cant decide how to progress the MC so story feels very empty in my opinion as nothing really happens other than a random slaughter every now and then. Story overall is not a bad read if your just looking for something fun but the plot and progression feels pretty empty overall and gets repetitive quickly.

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ImZephyr
ImZephyr
3 years ago
Commented

I love seeing the update notice for this but hate when I finish the chapter and realize I have to wait for more :P | Thanks for the chapter! |

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ImZephyr
ImZephyr
3 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter and all your hard work!

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ImZephyr
ImZephyr
3 years ago
Commented

no

ImZephyr
ImZephyr
3 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter! really hoping that there will be more scenes with the whole group together