Jaxiel

Jaxiel

LV 11

(ON REVISING STORY - That Overpowered Friend) Learning how to write~ Also posting stories in RoyalRoadLegends :)

2019-06-15 Bergabung Global
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Jaxiel
Jaxiel
10 months ago
Posted

Ayt, another isekai goin to my library. Just like what other comments says, your writing is amazing, you go in depth on certain aspects. this is some good shit.

Jaxiel
Jaxiel
10 months ago
Posted

Eyyy we go isekai again. Always excited to see when someone creates one. A unique approach, summary made me remember a certain manwha, your writing is amazing, all in all goods.

Jaxiel
Jaxiel
10 months ago
Posted

I do see passion in your writing, just gotta get better at spelling. The paragraphs are a bit too tight to read but understandable. Interesting read just needs a lot of polishing. :DD

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Jaxiel
Jaxiel
11 months ago
Posted

You go in-depth when explaining scenes, def good quality writing. A good zombie concept for the story, title's almost similar to danmachi anime lol. chapters are quite long though but I guess that's more content.

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Jaxiel
Jaxiel
11 months ago
Posted

Already, your synopsis is intriguing. The way go in-depth through your description is pretty impressive. your quality is def. 5/5. though there are some parts where sentences get a bit cramped and hard to read. Still, its worth the read

Jaxiel
Jaxiel
11 months ago
Posted

Sheeeeeeeeeesh, that was fire. its Saitama, already a 5/5 also, interestingly quite Good for an OPM Fanfic. Have a try, worth the read. --

Jaxiel
Jaxiel
11 months ago
Posted

Haven't read zombie apocalypse in a while, its good. Also, your comedy is gold. Impressive how created a story out of a discord chat. worth to give a read for fun.

Jaxiel
Jaxiel
11 months ago
Posted

Bruh, your writing style is already amazing. It isn't too straightforward yet still have dept on it. Anything else is just as good as your writing, worth giving a try

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Jaxiel
Jaxiel
1 years ago
Posted

It's intriguing, although the dialogue could do some work and also the synopsis. There potential with the concept, keep writing you got a good story to tell.

Jaxiel
Jaxiel
1 years ago
Posted

Bruh this is so cool. Your writing is precise. The depth is just simple yet still elaborative, keep on writing, I'm still on a few chapters, and this has potential. def 5/5.