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I read up to the most recent chapter (Chapter 32) and I say it's a great read, without boring systems or crazy tricks, just good old effort and use of logic, after all, if the MC already has all the knowledge of the plot the most the correct thing to do is to use it. So far 9/10, hope it stays that way, looking forward to more updates.

The bad side of putting titles is that they are always little spoilers of what is going to happen, for me this makes the chapters a little boring because you can predict what is going to happen before reading.

Aren't you ashamed of doing this kind of thing? Seriously, grow up a little and delete this review, I bet you didn't even read the story.

Friend, I think it's better to delete this comment, the author has already said that the story is his, so either rewrite this review or delete it, because leaving this is shameful.

This is the type of story I like, the protagonist is not a little guy who thinks he's very smart just because he wants to fool everyone, nor is he an arrogant idiot who thinks he's better than everyone just because he's stronger. No, the MC in this story is a good person, which is something rare, he is proof that there are still good people in this world and even though he is in a corrupt, rotten and blood-stained world he still carries hope, just like every guy who carries the title of HERO should have. A hero is not about having power, fame or a sad story, it is about doing good things out of pure kindness and overcoming all adversity with a smile on your face. That IS a hero.

I like that the author isn't simply copying and pasting things from the TV series, I can tell when they do that. He clearly knows this world and has a certain freedom to present characters and future dangers. I think it's cool that the MC knows he has an OP power but also knows he needs to get stronger and improve, he's not a "perfect" protagonist, he has flaws and can make mistakes. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

I'm really surprised by how good my experience reading this story has been. There have been 9 chapters so far, with no absurd powers, exciting fights or unexpected twists, just good old development, I feel that the author is creating a solid foundation for his story. It's 1940, the Second World War (...Steve) hasn't even started yet and yet I was more interested in reading these chapters about finance and management than 95% of the stories that exist on this website/app. I sincerely hope this story doesn't go down like so many others.

Delete this comment man, you have to read it before giving your opinion on the story and not just try to guess what will happen.

Sim, também acho. Isso não estraga a história, mas atrapalha um pouco a experiência durante a leitura. Por exemplo, aqui no Brasil usamos Metros e Quilômetros, então quando vejo Pounds e Milhas fico meio confuso.

Até agora é uma ótima história. Uma leitura fácil, com um protagonista decente e um enredo instigante. Se fosse para apontar algo seria que o autor fica usando dois sistemas de medida, mas tirando isso, é uma história que vale apena ler. Espero que o autor não deixe cair.

Que raro uma fanfic de Arcane/LoL nesse site. Muito boa a história, li 27 capítulos e estou adorando. Ansioso por mais! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ ............................................................................................................................

Bro, at least take the trouble to read the story before commenting on this, like, give me some real reason to think the story is bad.

A great story so far (I've read six chapters), the beginning is not one of my favorites, I don't like it when the protagonists meet a deity and gain powers in roulette wheels before being reborn, I prefer it when the stories skipped that part, but it was still a very good start. I like that the MC has a "realistic" family interaction with the Kents and isn't an annoying person who doesn't consider them family, I like the fact that he hasn't turned into a crazy genocidal killer who goes around killing all metahumans, I like the his powers and how he can grow using magic, after all with Tamaranean powers the MC lost most of the weaknesses that magicians normally have. In conclusion, I hope the author can continue with this level of writing and doesn't discard this story, I always really enjoyed watching Smallville.

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Final Fantasy? Twin brother of sephiroth? I don't even have to read to give my verdict. 😁✌ More chapters, more chapters, more chapters, more chapters, more chapters, more chapters, more chapters ... ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

I liked this story, I hope the author doesn't stop or give up in the middle. I liked this story, I hope the author doesn't stop or give up in the middle.