VonBritannia

that was....that was a great chapter bro.

finally. so many people take this story and drop it. you actually stuck too it. shits amazing dont know why people drop ot so fast. keep at it.

yo when is wordpress gonna come back up. was reading chaps on that website?

bro striaght up best chapter yet.

sensational. once my power stones come back i got you

bro this is literally my fav novel rn and its been like that since when i started reading it and it only had 15 chapters

gc

also dope chapter. but you should cut down on inner dialogue and add more interactions with the world around him so it doesnt read like a dairy but phenominal work so far. like legit 10 chapters in and we already at peak. one thing gping for you is star wars fics spend way to much time on an mcs childhood and youd get to chapter 80 and still no clone wars. you did a good job streamlining his childhood and adolences in a fast but enjoyable manner.

so this has warhammer elements? tzeeh from warhammer? if so is lelouch dancing to its tune or hes playing him.

sensational